Contemporary Poetry: Search and Destroy

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let's have it then.

Artiste, Sunday, 22 September 2002 15:02 (twenty-three years ago)

I just discovered Thom Gunn. I am also interested in reading some Anne Sexton - she seems to write in the same style as Plath. But in all honest, I am not very knowledgeable when it comes to poetry - nor do I like/read it that much.

nathalie (nathalie), Sunday, 22 September 2002 15:31 (twenty-three years ago)

Search: (Brit) Paul Farley, Don Paterson, Michael Donaghy, Roddy Lumsden
(US)Mark Halliday, Dean Young
(Canadian - for Anthony :) ) Anne Carson

Destroy: I think in Britain, rather than any particular poet, I would destroy Heaney/Hughes anthologies 'The Rattle Bag' and 'The School Bag' - they present the history of Brit-poetry as relentless mud and blood, and are overused in schools.

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Sunday, 22 September 2002 15:38 (twenty-three years ago)

Destroy Simon Armitage, without mercy.

Dom Passantino (Dom Passantino), Sunday, 22 September 2002 15:53 (twenty-three years ago)

Fite! Or rather, why, Dom? (I like him, but I don't know much about poetry, sadly, so I can't really defend him.)

Rebecca (reb), Sunday, 22 September 2002 16:02 (twenty-three years ago)

Mainly for the Goddawful poem he wrote about the scissors and the bunsen burner.

I'm anti-canonical when it comes to literature (ie, I hate everything that was ever given to me by an English teacher. Except Pride and Prejudice, obv)

Dom Passantino (Dom Passantino), Sunday, 22 September 2002 16:04 (twenty-three years ago)

j.h.prynne!!

mark s (mark s), Sunday, 22 September 2002 16:06 (twenty-three years ago)

destroy- stan rice

search- sandra cisneros

dos passos is someone i'm aquiring a taste for.

mike (ro)bott, Sunday, 22 September 2002 17:00 (twenty-three years ago)

Search: John Burnside. And search him now. (Interested to hear the Nipper's thoughts on Scotland's current finest.)

david h (david h), Sunday, 22 September 2002 17:01 (twenty-three years ago)

Have you read WN Herbert, David? If not, you might like him - he claims to be inspired by a combination of Mark E Smith and MacGonagall. I like the idea of him more than the actual poems.

It's feasible that Scottish poetry 70s/80s/90s is as strong as any in the world in its breadth and invention: Burnside, Herbert, Crawford, Paterson, Jamie, Kay, Lumsden - even Duffy has a claim to Scottishness. I certainly can't imagine reeling off a similarly strong list of any other nation's poets (they are certainly stronger than similarly aged English writers). I think there's probably a very good book to be written about this generation's ascent and Scottish cultural self-confidence, devolution etc. If I had to choose one book it would probably be Don Paterson's 'Nil Nil' (Faber).

Jerry the Nipper (Jerrynipper), Sunday, 22 September 2002 17:48 (twenty-three years ago)

''j.h.prynne!!''

thought you would come up with that name. is that a 'search' or a 'destroy'?

and of course: b*n W**son to thread!

Julio Desouza (jdesouza), Sunday, 22 September 2002 18:01 (twenty-three years ago)

You mean Carole Ann Duffy, right?

david h (david h), Sunday, 22 September 2002 20:00 (twenty-three years ago)

Search: Ess Kay, bnw, Norman Phay.

Destroy: Janet Paisley.

david h (david h), Sunday, 22 September 2002 20:10 (twenty-three years ago)

Jerry, I just googled some Herbert - huh? Why'd'you'think'I'would'like'him?

david h (david h), Sunday, 22 September 2002 20:12 (twenty-three years ago)

destroy also: donna tart

mike (ro)bott, Sunday, 22 September 2002 20:40 (twenty-three years ago)

I can't think of a single living poet I like. (obv. exception being Mark E. Smith) I'll look up some of these mentioned to see if they're any good, tho.

Justyn Dillingham (Justyn Dillingham), Sunday, 22 September 2002 21:10 (twenty-three years ago)

I am taking Contemporary Poetry as a class in university next semester. I think I have to create my own anthology as course work, so I am busy taking notes of notable poets. Timely question.

Madeleine, Sunday, 22 September 2002 21:16 (twenty-three years ago)

John Ashbery is GREYDT in a journey vs. destination sort of way

Aaron A., Sunday, 22 September 2002 21:22 (twenty-three years ago)

watching thwe rockies game this afternoon i discovered that arizona diamondbacks pitcher miguel bautista has recently had published a book of his poetry, that is probably classic.

keith (keithmcl), Sunday, 22 September 2002 21:55 (twenty-three years ago)

Search: Poems that go,Fence Magazine,Poetry Daily, and mark's spider poem.

bnw (bnw), Sunday, 22 September 2002 22:47 (twenty-three years ago)

ned: nows yr chance, ananda wonder!

di smith (lucylurex), Sunday, 22 September 2002 23:41 (twenty-three years ago)

it's not mine it's by hannah aged 6!!


Acrostic Spider Poem

Sticky spider webs catching fly.
Poisonous spider creepy.
Insects fly in the shining webs.
Delicious spider have spotty.
Every spider make big webs.
Running around the country.
spider! spider! spider!

mark s (mark s), Sunday, 22 September 2002 23:43 (twenty-three years ago)

Ah yes. Written by I. L. Xor in Ananda about ten days ago:

Contemplating the eagles that soared, I pondered thusly:
Buy two, get one free!
You penis pumper
I spy with my little eyes
Shit fuck bloody hell
Distance helps preserve beauty
Lost in the fleeting, almost an insignificance.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Monday, 23 September 2002 00:33 (twenty-three years ago)

''Acrostic Spider Poem

Sticky spider webs catching fly.
Poisonous spider creepy.
Insects fly in the shining webs.
Delicious spider have spotty.
Every spider make big webs.
Running around the country.
spider! spider! spider!''

that's the best incontemporary poetry I have seen. evah!

Julio Desouza (jdesouza), Monday, 23 September 2002 10:36 (twenty-three years ago)

That's odd, Jerry - change "Scottish" to "New Zealand" & I'd fairly much parrot your second paragraph. & thanks for the recommendations.

Curnow, amazingly, is still contemporary - only recently dead, & The Bells of St Babel's is up there with his best work (all seventy years of it, ha). Eggleton, Reeve, Bernholdt, Ascroft, Wood, Black & Howard off the top of my head are brilliant, & that's only people still/starting to publish. Baxter is already a mythic New Zealand figure despite being a mid-to-late 20th century poet - in the New Zealand imagination, he's the equivalent of Byron or the Beats.

(er, thanks david. also : ned+di, it's time to . . . er, die!)

Ess Kay (esskay), Tuesday, 24 September 2002 06:32 (twenty-three years ago)

OHMYGOD. JERRY. I just picked up Nil Nil in Oxfam books, I didn't remember you saying that this was your 'pick' but I liked the blurb and price and... OH MY GOD. 'Elliptical Stylus'; 'The Ferryman's Arms'... * *

david h (david h), Wednesday, 25 September 2002 11:58 (twenty-three years ago)

The Nipper: I have just read Hermione Lee's gushing Guardian review of HUGO WILLIAMS' Collected Poems. By god, it sounds dreadful. I want your view of him in full.

the pinefox (the pinefox), Wednesday, 25 September 2002 12:02 (twenty-three years ago)

(HW used to be a particularly terrible TV reviewer, also, in the new statesman)

mark s (mark s), Wednesday, 25 September 2002 12:46 (twenty-three years ago)

two weeks pass...
I heard Rogan Whitenails read at the Angel in the Fields recently. He looked like Ron Sexsmith playing a new Doctor Who, wearing a sort of quaint lederhosen affair - moss green jacket with sedately wide collars and cracked leather buttons.

Search: http://www.amazon.co.uk/exec/obidos/ASIN/0953456617/qid%3D1034593218/202-9940018-4047050

Owen, Monday, 14 October 2002 10:20 (twenty-three years ago)

three weeks pass...
"Jigsy Nips" - you are spot on re:the idea of WN Herbert = much better than the poems. Have you read any Neil Rollinson?

david h (david h), Monday, 4 November 2002 18:43 (twenty-three years ago)

one year passes...
I have a poetry class this semester, and the assignment for Wednesday is to bring in my "favorite" contemporary poem, annotated and photocopied for the rest of the class. I know zero about contemporary poets. I know zero about contemporary poetry. I know zero about any poetry. (Which, strangely enough, was one of the reasons I chose to enroll in a poetry class, but judging by the first meeting, it seems I may need a remedial course, or something.) But anyway. I don't read it, I don't write it, blah blah blah, and while I see there is a rather extensive list of poets on this thread (most of whom, I shamefully admit, I have never even heard of), I am pressed for time and would really like to read some very concise descriptions, maybe two or three words, of some of the poets listed and/or their work. As opposed to doing dozens of searches and picking my way hundreds of poems when I have tons of other homework to do and a pan of bacon in the oven, that is. So yeah, if you feel like being creative or something and writing a really brief description of a contemporary poet so that I don't have to actively seek out knowledge on my own, that would be cool of you. And fun for you, maybe. Hi.

kirsten (kirsten), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 02:39 (twenty-one years ago)

Hello. I was just going to say Search: Edwin Morgan (my favourite poet). But it seems rude for me to ignore your post and answer the thread, so...Scottish poet, experimental and conventional. Does lots of sound poetry, some concrete poetry. Also uses trad forms like sonnet. Likes ordinary voices and science fiction. He really has done a bit of everything though, so he's hard to describe. I love hime anyway.

Kevin Gilchrist (Mr Fusion), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 03:52 (twenty-one years ago)

check out st. lucian poet derek walcott!

s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 04:07 (twenty-one years ago)

I'm rather partial to Robert Lowell.

And for a sort of Cliffs Notes style site have a look here:

http://www.plagiarist.com

It has some nice samples of many poets and some peoples essays and commentary you might find handy if in a rush?

"Home After Three MOnths Away" is a nice poem about him returning home after being in a psych ward (self admitted) for 3 months. Lowell had a history of bipolar disorder, and also spent time in jail for being a concientous objector during WW2.

http://plagiarist.com/poetry/8003/

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 04:23 (twenty-one years ago)

Oh. On second look the analysis notes cost money damn. But there are some reader comments on some poems too.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 04:24 (twenty-one years ago)

Anne Carson, especially Plainwater
Rae Armantrout, Veil is a good overview

(Jon L), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 04:30 (twenty-one years ago)

I'm pretty sure Robert Lowell has been dead for a while, and thus is not "contemporary".

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 05:24 (twenty-one years ago)

He's a 50s-60s poet, I regard that as contemporary - especially seeing as people like Anne Sexton were mentioned at the start of the thread.

Also that my book "Faber Book of Contemporary American Poetry" runs from about Wallace Stevens onwards.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 05:29 (twenty-one years ago)

forgot to give my description of Carson & Armentrout: they are both completely fucking insane

(Jon L), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 05:46 (twenty-one years ago)

Similarly, Jerry Lee Lewis makes some contemporary pop music.

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 05:57 (twenty-one years ago)

I don't necessarily mean to be bitchy, but as someone who actually participates in and is interested in actually contemporary poetry, the notion (which seems to be on the syllabus of most colleges) that poetry kinda stopped around 1963 (somewhere around Plath's suicide) is a pet peeve.

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 05:59 (twenty-one years ago)

I didnt suggest any such thing! I said I was fond of Lowell, is all, crikey.

(as it happens I'm a writer of poetry myself and have been published in local lit magazines, and while I dont regard myself anywhere near well read enough, I am a) not a teenage goth LJ "poet" and b) get very tired of Plath-bashing, its as old as this notion poetry stopped with her is).

While I dig your peeve, saying things like "someone who ACTUALLT participates in" is a little on the offensive side, soz.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 06:11 (twenty-one years ago)

Dammit typos. Got cranky.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 06:13 (twenty-one years ago)

Kirsten, if the assignment is to bring a *poem* rather than a poet, then I would get thee to an anthology and just pick something you like. I figure that an assignment like this wants to focus in on how you are at close reading, what your instincts and preferences are etc. Don't suppose there will be a right or wrong answer or that you are expected to give a huge amount of background on the poet.

Obviously as you say, you don't want to be wading through hundreds of poems to find your 'favourite' so you might have to be a little dishonest there... but I'm sure you could find something you liked without too much trouble.

Or have a look at The Poetry Thread on I Love Books.

Archel (Archel), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 07:27 (twenty-one years ago)

derek wollcott slocki, thank you for that, its been months since i had thot of him, hes fantastic--if a bit reactionary (though tht might be his fans, im remebering the atlantic review of the new nortons and how irrationally angry it was at idenity centered (what ever that means) and langauge poets and using wolcott as an example of what is right in a world that has gone wrong, so yeah i may be tarring him with the wrong brush in the whole reactionary charge

anthony, Tuesday, 7 September 2004 18:35 (twenty-one years ago)

I read a Derek Wolcott poem that serves as the preface to a book this weekend, I had forgotten how marvelous he can be, his phrasing is so perfect. And yes please look at The Poetry Thread.

jocelyn (Jocelyn), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 18:57 (twenty-one years ago)

It's hard to think of anything these days that matters less than poetry.

But pressed to pick a contemporary poet I'd say check out Anselm Berrigan.

shookout (shookout), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 18:57 (twenty-one years ago)

most of what is good has some element of poetry.

cºzen (Cozen), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 18:59 (twenty-one years ago)

i like strand, and walcott yes.

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 19:00 (twenty-one years ago)

i love robert hass & tony hoaglund.

kelsey (kelstarry), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 19:59 (twenty-one years ago)

go robert hass!

cºzen (Cozen), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:00 (twenty-one years ago)

I need to borrow that Tony Hoagland book from you.

jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:13 (twenty-one years ago)

thanks to leaf, i now have two. you're welcome to borrow both, if you want. i think i still like donkey gospel the best.

kelsey (kelstarry), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:32 (twenty-one years ago)

I meant the new one. But I guess I haven't read Donkey Gospel, have I?

jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:45 (twenty-one years ago)

Robert Hass is a wuss.

shookout (shookout), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:46 (twenty-one years ago)

he totally isn't.

---
j-take both if you want.

kelsey (kelstarry), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:52 (twenty-one years ago)

Has anyone else noticed that poets generally find themselves far too interesting?

Sorry about the jab at Hass. I had to read "Field Guide" in college and didn't like it that much.

My favorite poet is probably Elizabeth Bishop.

Or Emily Dickinson, who is still, somehow, incredibly modern.

The worst are "spoken word," "performance artists" like Penny Arcade, Maggie Estep. The kind of poets you'd see on MTV in the early '90s...or today at the Def Poetry Jam. Awful (awful!) stuff.

shookout (shookout), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 20:59 (twenty-one years ago)

It's hard to think of anything these days that matters less than poetry.

On the one hand, since when is poetry supposed to "matter"? And on the other hand, I think this is only true if you take a very narrow view of what poetry is.

But anyways, Anselm's pretty darn good. Saw him read up in Seattle a while back. It was pretty darn good. His father is one of my all time favorite poets, but he's been dead for a while now so he's not quite contemporary.

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 21:06 (twenty-one years ago)

i still carry round that sonnets chris, and read it and it moves me, like some kind of tidal basin where my belly should be

an thony, Tuesday, 7 September 2004 21:11 (twenty-one years ago)

Leonard Cohen was included in the Norton's some time back. If poetry may now matter so little to younger people especially, are there any other more "popular" singer/songwriters et al whose work stands up to the rigours of good poetic critique, that could get more people interested? I'm curious.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 21:41 (twenty-one years ago)

"spoken word poetry sucks" = "they don't use real instruments"

bnw (bnw), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 22:54 (twenty-one years ago)

By not mattering I mean there was a time when people listened to what poets had to say. Think JFK having Robert Frost read at his inaguration, or Allen Ginsberg testifying before the senete subcommitte...or poets having a voice or role in political or social life. I'm not talking about a reading series in urban areas to the same 100 people slightly rotating from week to week...There's just a void right now.

Re: spoken word/bnw...maybe what you say could be an interesting comparison, if spoken word didn't suck so bad. If you can listed on Penny Arcade and her ilk without cringing at the level of self-involvement and talentless ego involved, well...best of luck to you.

Anselm's definitely great...especially Zero Star Hotel. His dad died in '81, I believe. His mother, Alice Notley, is also a really great poet.

shookout (shookout), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 23:14 (twenty-one years ago)

Well, Clinton had Maya Angelou read at his inauguration. Now, "The Gift Outright" and "On The Pulse Of Morning" (or whatever they are called) are both awkward and moderately appalling poems, although Frost's is more interestingly appalling, perhaps. But Angelou's lead to that great S+7 poem (by Ed Dorn and someone else, I think?). So it's a toss-up.

I have to admit, I haven't really read that much Alice Notley, and this is perhaps unfortunate. But Edmund is all right as well.

Casuistry (Chris P), Tuesday, 7 September 2004 23:38 (twenty-one years ago)

nine months pass...
Def Poetry Jam gets worse every season

milozauckerman (miloaukerman), Tuesday, 21 June 2005 02:30 (twenty years ago)

"spoken word poetry sucks" = "they don't use real instruments"

This falls flat for the simple reason that spoken word poetry brings no joy.

As I understand it, "spoken word poetry sucks" = something more like "most spoken word poets preach to the choir, play to the rafters, and generally out-Herod Herod while doing little of interest with the language in the most self-satisfied possible way.

This is not to say that most artists working in any genre are by and large uninteresting, grandiose, and certain to be irrelevant by this time next year. Which is what makes the good ones so precious, no?

PS to def/spoken word poets: bring on the instruments, real or otherwise.

rogermexico (rogermexico), Tuesday, 21 June 2005 03:20 (twenty years ago)

eight years pass...

How do you guys find new stuff to enjoy? So much of what I read in my occasional thumbing through journals is so sterile.

BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Thursday, 15 August 2013 15:16 (twelve years ago)

This falls flat for the simple reason that spoken word poetry brings no joy.

this is quite a thing to say!

BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Thursday, 15 August 2013 15:16 (twelve years ago)

Rolling Contemporary Poetry

markers, Thursday, 15 August 2013 15:19 (twelve years ago)

oh, look at that.

BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Thursday, 15 August 2013 15:26 (twelve years ago)

this is quite a thing to say!

― BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Thursday, August 15, 2013

ha. i'd probably temper that a bit now. less immediately burnt on the scene, more appreciative of what it is vs disappointed in what its not.

that said ime most of the pleasure to be found in spoken word is still down to "mhm, preach it" but then the spoken word genre owes more to the pulpit than it usually cares to admit.

resulting post (rogermexico.), Thursday, 15 August 2013 16:38 (twelve years ago)

How do you guys find new stuff to enjoy?

dating a poet helps

Rothko's Chicken and Waffles (donna rouge), Thursday, 15 August 2013 16:47 (twelve years ago)

being a poet is not helping :(

BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Thursday, 15 August 2013 16:53 (twelve years ago)

how to date poet

BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Thursday, 15 August 2013 16:54 (twelve years ago)

think i found it from the nytimes piece re: todays young poets as influenced by jack handey -- def recommend mark leidner - beauty was the case that they gave me

johnny crunch, Thursday, 15 August 2013 23:21 (twelve years ago)

http://ecx.images-amazon.com/images/I/61Q0%2BvnY-eL._SY300_.jpg

johnny crunch, Thursday, 15 August 2013 23:21 (twelve years ago)

not that you're missing the reference jc but i'm pretty sure "murder was the case that they gave me" is not a Deep Thought ;)

resulting post (rogermexico.), Friday, 16 August 2013 00:03 (twelve years ago)

the fact that he titled his book 'beauty was the case that he gave me' is already enough to prompt a "really, is that all you got" reaction tbh

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 16 August 2013 17:58 (twelve years ago)

So much of what I read in my occasional thumbing through journals is so sterile.

I find I have no patience for discovering new poetry by thumbing through literary and "little" magazines. That's why I am terrible at finding new stuff to enjoy. However, I do get great pleasure from the ILE poetry threads, which are never sterile. It's a shame we get so few poetry threads the past couple of years, but I haven't been a ball of fire at starting or sustaining them, so I can't complain. Much.

Aimless, Friday, 16 August 2013 18:05 (twelve years ago)

i've only thumbed through the last few issues but there's good stuff in this journal:

http://www.litmuspress.org/catalog/aufgabe/

Rothko's Chicken and Waffles (donna rouge), Friday, 16 August 2013 18:23 (twelve years ago)

jane yeh, THE NINJAS, people

Guayaquil (eephus!), Friday, 16 August 2013 20:29 (twelve years ago)

seven months pass...

http://www.poetryfoundation.org/harriet/2014/04/a-diagnosis-of-the-maladies-of-poets-of-the-modern-age/

A Diagnosis of the Maladies of Poets of the Modern Age
By Patricia Lockwood

*

in which I answer the pressing question: what is wrong with us?

*

Choked on sunlight streaming through window

Loss of mental erections

Ate McDonald’s hamburger as a child and can’t stop feeling guilty about it

Thought so hard about his own father that he died

Memory problem — too many memories

Fatally injured while attempting to morph into an animal

Can’t ever cut beard or he loses his strength

Caught a tiny bit of sports in one eye; went blind

Wrote a Statement of Purpose and couldn’t stop; began shooting Statement of Purpose in forceful jets out of every orifice

Sat on a panel and it ruined her butt for all time

Compound linebreak in left leg

Dutch Elm disease, which the poet contracted while making out with trees

“Adult Soft-Spot Syndrome”

Drunk, always

Terrible growth in throat that dramatically recites her poems whenever she opens her mouth

Reverse Forrest Gump Disorder, where the person in question is very intelligent but never wants to move or do any sort of American duty

Caught rabies from a skunk, ROBERT LOWELL

Consumption

j., Thursday, 10 April 2014 21:24 (eleven years ago)

wow

schlump, Thursday, 10 April 2014 23:09 (eleven years ago)

oh they're teaching the listicle in MFA programs now

resulting post (rogermexico.), Friday, 11 April 2014 00:27 (eleven years ago)

^^ buttruined for all time

j., Friday, 11 April 2014 00:36 (eleven years ago)

Not really a poem, that

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 01:27 (eleven years ago)

hm yes
hmmm

schlump, Friday, 11 April 2014 01:35 (eleven years ago)

thrilled to get to be the person here who says Nothing Is Not A Poem

schlump, Friday, 11 April 2014 01:41 (eleven years ago)

What is wrong? There are too goddamned many poems about poetry and the writing of poetry and the mystery of poetry and how poetry ought to be and how it works and how it fails and the marvel of reading poetry and appreciation of other poets' poems. Write poems about something besides poetry, you tail-chasing maniacs!

Aimless, Friday, 11 April 2014 02:41 (eleven years ago)

this poem was about poets. time to brush up on your close reading!

j., Friday, 11 April 2014 02:55 (eleven years ago)

(hangs head in shame)

Aimless, Friday, 11 April 2014 03:43 (eleven years ago)

@ schlump, if I liked it and someone said it wasn't a poem I'd of course be manning the barricades saying that anything can be a poem

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 13:51 (eleven years ago)

that poem is rad

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 13:58 (eleven years ago)

she's great

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 13:58 (eleven years ago)

*ejactulates in the form of a sonnet*

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 13:58 (eleven years ago)

For those who have a spare minute, that piece basically elicits a response of: recognition, combined with humour and some thoughts, at an intensity of about 1.5 out of 10.

The thing is that the piece is based on the idea that there is something wrong ('maladies') with poets of our age, okay, so let's hear what the problem is ... well, it turns out that the problem isn't all that serious if it's the kind of thing you can joke about using faux-seriousness (like 'diagnosing the maladies of poets of our age') and puns.

And here I am, all geared up to hear what's wrong with poets of our age and excited to see what can be done with lists in a poem (it's been done a lot but you never know, let's be open-minded here), and I'm not getting much bang for my buck. The middlebrow levity of the piece is as much of a contemporary poetry cliche as the nature writing and poems about the author's father that it seeks to criticise.

Caveats, a totally serious account of the great curse affecting poetry today would probably be worse, and the boundary between the trivial and the light touch is different for different readers ... but really I'd like to see someone taking the risk of actually trying to write a poem, I think, even though this is likely to end in outright failure

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:08 (eleven years ago)

you're reading the poem wrong, trying to make it do something it's not trying to do

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:13 (eleven years ago)

xp And I've probably gone on about this before but 'anything can be a poem' (like 'anything can be art') is basically a one neat trick you can use to shut down conversations about poetry and crucially doesn't tell us anything about why I should bother paying any more attention to that poem, than to the D key on my keyboard here, or the empty coke can next to my laptop or whatever

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:17 (eleven years ago)

"my cat could paint that"

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:18 (eleven years ago)

waterface: no, I get what it's doing and am not in the business of trying to get poems to be other than what they are - it can be a great example of its species (which we're probably obliged to recognise, dunno?) but that doesn't mean anyone's obliged to like it

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:19 (eleven years ago)

The thing is that the piece is based on the idea that there is something wrong ('maladies') with poets of our age, okay, so let's hear what the problem is ... well, it turns out that the problem isn't all that serious if it's the kind of thing you can joke about using faux-seriousness (like 'diagnosing the maladies of poets of our age') and puns.

The poem is not based on this idea.

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:20 (eleven years ago)

If each of those lines in the poem were comments on an ILX thread called 'ITT we diagnose maladies of the poets of our age' I'd probably put 'haha' or even 'otm' under most of them but no-one on ILX calls the threads 'poems', they're just threads

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:22 (eleven years ago)

so wait are you saying you would rather have a poem, a full fledged erect poem, that people are OBLIGED to like? that would do it for you?

if there's one thing i like, it's what i'm obliged to. o man. obligation.

j., Friday, 11 April 2014 14:22 (eleven years ago)

xxp Its subtitle would suggest that it kind of is?

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:23 (eleven years ago)

j. nope where did I give that impression?

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:23 (eleven years ago)

the tenor of your complaint seems to be WHY SHOULD I HUH (go back and look at what you've said)

so it was you, and your words, that gave me that impression

j., Friday, 11 April 2014 14:25 (eleven years ago)

Ah no, what I was going for was more 'yeah, exactly, we shd be reading poems on their own terms and expecting it to be Tristan Corbiere or whatever if it isn't that, but sometimes a perfectly good X isn't what you need and arguably Xs in general are not quite as good as Ys'

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:29 (eleven years ago)

*and not expecting

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:29 (eleven years ago)

i think i basically agree with cardamon but i'd say it's more an intensity of 5.5 to 6

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:36 (eleven years ago)

would anyone be up for a thread where we post, sequentially, once a week, every poem in The Best American Poetry 2013 and talk about what's wrong with it

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:37 (eleven years ago)

"caught rabies from a skunk, ROBERT LOWELL" -- is this meant to be, like, a grocery bag thing? but also: for whom is lowell 'poets of our time'? -- it seems like this is tossed off in a way that makes me not want to overthink it, but the types it addresses seem like straw men, and not even current ones

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:40 (eleven years ago)

what's wrong with just experiencing the language for language's sake, and not worrying about what it means

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:48 (eleven years ago)

I suppose the idea is that all these poets sat at the feet of Robert Lowell and then based on his poem skunk hour went off to find some skunks, because, well, if Robert Lowell says they have an epiphanic quality it's worth a go right? But in the event they just got bitten/caught rabies ... yeah, ROBERT LOWELL, thanks a bunch.

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:52 (eleven years ago)

And yeah thomp I'd be up for that thread but not just to say what's wrong with each poem

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:53 (eleven years ago)

p.s. 'This Poem is About My Father' guy is definitely a current type of poet, but who today is making out with trees?

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 14:57 (eleven years ago)

cases for the defence will be admitted

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:58 (eleven years ago)

i think 'making out w trees' has broader readings than just the sort of ppl who write about how great trees are but idk

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 11 April 2014 14:58 (eleven years ago)

Thoreau? 'Hippies'? Yeah idk either

cardamon, Friday, 11 April 2014 15:08 (eleven years ago)

ppl who want to be ecstatic about things

♛ LIL UNIT ♛ (thomp), Friday, 11 April 2014 17:10 (eleven years ago)

it's almost as if trees… and sunlight… and animals… are some sort of stand-in for something else… some thing, some realm… i was never any good at poetry though…

j., Friday, 11 April 2014 17:20 (eleven years ago)

http://www.poetryfoundation.org/harriet/2014/04/six-facts-about-pens/

waterbabies (waterface), Friday, 11 April 2014 18:27 (eleven years ago)

^^ was waiting for that to make an appearance

resulting post (rogermexico.), Saturday, 12 April 2014 00:21 (eleven years ago)

fwiw, I've seen cuneiform tablets and I would offer this emendation:

3. ouch

4. OUCH

5. YEEEOUCH!!

6. BLOODY FUCKING HELL, GET THAT AWAY FROM ME!

Aimless, Saturday, 12 April 2014 02:02 (eleven years ago)


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