Don't Stop Believin' has an all time verse that the chorus doesn't come close to delivering upon― niels, Thursday, September 21, 2017 12:54 AM (seven years ago) bookmarkflaglink
― niels, Thursday, September 21, 2017 12:54 AM (seven years ago) bookmarkflaglink
I think about this post sometimes.
What are other examples of front-loaded songs with an underwhelming chorus?
― budo jeru, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 16:36 (four months ago)
Funky Town
― the wedding preset (dog latin), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 16:39 (four months ago)
Closing time Hard to explain Gaucho
― Vapor waif (uptown churl), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:02 (four months ago)
Serve the Servants
― Western® with Bacon Flavor, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:04 (four months ago)
Lucy in the sky with diamonds
― AlXTC from Paris, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:06 (four months ago)
God Save The Queen
― LocalGarda, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:14 (four months ago)
gaucho is majorly notm
"do it again" is closer
― what angers me about the smurfs these days (voodoo chili), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:16 (four months ago)
Your Love by the Outfield
― hope is the thing with challops (f. hazel), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:25 (four months ago)
Drop Dead Legs
― Master of Treacle, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:28 (four months ago)
Love Is The Drug
― Inside The Wasp Factory with Gregg Wallace (Camaraderie at Arms Length), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:34 (four months ago)
The Boys Are Back In Town
― completely suited to the horny decadence (Capitaine Jay Vee), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:35 (four months ago)
Heat of the Moment
― unboxing helena (Matt #2), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:48 (four months ago)
How does the DSB chorus not deliver?
― Iza Duffus Hardy (President Keyes), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:52 (four months ago)
Love Shack
― Western® with Bacon Flavor, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 17:57 (four months ago)
Return of the Mack might be one of these, though maybe an example of a song so good it doesn't actually need a chorus
― frogbs, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:03 (four months ago)
The Prep MC would beg to differ
Are you calling the chorus "oh oh, get that buzz" etc. or the wordless "oh oh oh" parts? Cos I agree with the latter.
I get the feeling a lot of people here don't like choruses that repeat titles over and over.
― Halfway there but for you, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:18 (four months ago)
Message in a Bottle? awesome riff, great verses, insane drumming, real catchy prechorus, then the actual chorus is just "Message in a bottle...whoa....message in a bottle"...also the slowest part of the song
― frogbs, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:23 (four months ago)
actually a lot of the Police's choruses on their hit singles just sound like placeholders. Can't Stand Losing You, Don't Stand So Close To Me, Spirits in the Material World...they all sound like they were written in 15 minutes
― frogbs, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:26 (four months ago)
― Inside The Wasp Factory with Gregg Wallace (Camaraderie at Arms Length), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:29 (four months ago)
― frogbs, Wednesday, January 29, 2025 1:26 PM (fourteen minutes ago) bookmarkflaglink
no, they put a lot of thought into "de do do do, de da da da." and "so lonely."
i don't necessarily think that repetition is necessarily a bad thing. the chorus to "roxanne" is repetitive, but it's also an incredible chorus.
― what angers me about the smurfs these days (voodoo chili), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:45 (four months ago)
also, i would say the chorus of "message" includes the "i'll send an s.o.s. to the world" part
― what angers me about the smurfs these days (voodoo chili), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:46 (four months ago)
damn this is the thread everyone goes to to be wrong
― ivy., Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:46 (four months ago)
return of the mac is a bizarre choice here, must be one of the catchiest choruses of the last few decades, all those little flourishes. you don't attempt and successfully execute a 'once again' mid-chorus in a shitty chorus.
― LocalGarda, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 18:54 (four months ago)
let alone a "pump up the world"!
― maf you one two (maffew12), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:01 (four months ago)
Every Little Thing She Does is Magic might be the ultimate shitty Police chorus following an awesome verse
― unboxing helena (Matt #2), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:05 (four months ago)
he's nearly crammed a second chorus in there. that's the effect of the rehabilitation programme at her majesty's prison leicester.
xpost
― LocalGarda, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:07 (four months ago)
i'm not complaining about the Return of the Mack chorus more in that i'm not sure if it really has one, it's very similar to the verse, maybe this is a lot more common than i think, it's just top of mind because I recently did a mashup with it
hah, I was thinking of this as one of the examples where they actually do work in a good, distinct chorus
― frogbs, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:09 (four months ago)
just think it's a little, uh ... precarious to go on a message board and disparage the choruses of big hits and songs that have endured for decades. by definition, those choruses are quite effective, regardless of anyone's good/bad assessment.
― alpine static, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:36 (four months ago)
Who Let the Dogs Out
― frogbs, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:38 (four months ago)
what does 'endured for decades' mean in this context? if every song i can remember is good then why are we even here?
― LocalGarda, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:40 (four months ago)
The Beatles suck, actually
― hope is the thing with challops (f. hazel), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:43 (four months ago)
they were good before Ringo joined
― frogbs, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 19:47 (four months ago)
Someone convince me the chorus of the Lovin' Spoonful's "Summer in the City" lives up to the verse
― unboxing helena (Matt #2), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 20:00 (four months ago)
It was a big hit that has endured for decades QED
Actually I like that the chorus is in two parts, with different chord changes, and it doesn't rhyme "city" and "gritty".
― Halfway there but for you, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 20:05 (four months ago)
Baby You're a Rich Man
― Hideous Lump, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 20:10 (four months ago)
Drain You by Nirvana
― kornrulez6969, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 21:30 (four months ago)
It's not like it was an anticipation-baiting buildup but following
Don't you remember, you told me you loved me, baby?You said you'd be coming back this way again, baby
with
Baby, baby, baby, baby, oh baby
felt like homer simpson crayoned over the lyric sheets.https://frinkiac.com/video/S14E02/k7dNYKljiPciQtf17ezpecC6Fh4=.gif
― Philip Nunez, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 23:15 (four months ago)
Looks that way.
― Please play Lou Reed's irritating guitar sounds (Tom D.), Wednesday, 29 January 2025 23:23 (four months ago)
Technically the chorus comes first, and Weird Al kind of has no choice once he's committed to doing song-length parodies, but the remainder of "This song is just six words long" is just filler.
― Philip Nunez, Wednesday, 29 January 2025 23:35 (four months ago)
The Boxer is the only one I can immediately think of, especially knowing that the li-li-li chorus is literally a placeholder.
Summer in the City is perfect, come on now.
― gjoon1, Thursday, 30 January 2025 00:03 (four months ago)
"This song is just six words long" annoys me for another reason, it's seven words, the song it's parodying has seven words in the chorus, I think he should not have done it
― frogbs, Thursday, 30 January 2025 00:11 (four months ago)
The Boxer's chorus is perfect
― alpine static, Thursday, 30 January 2025 00:28 (four months ago)
Heat of the Moment― unboxing helena (Matt #2), Wednesday, January 29, 2025 12:48 PM (seven hours ago) bookmark flag link
― unboxing helena (Matt #2), Wednesday, January 29, 2025 12:48 PM (seven hours ago) bookmark flag link
Right album, wrong song. The correct answer is "One Step Closer."
― If you choose too long a name, your new display name will be trunc (SlimAndSlam), Thursday, 30 January 2025 00:59 (four months ago)
Dido - Thank You
― ✖✖✖ (Moka), Thursday, 30 January 2025 01:14 (four months ago)
Dua Lipa - New Rules
is it even a chorus?
― ✖✖✖ (Moka), Thursday, 30 January 2025 01:18 (four months ago)
I think Ariana Grande has a bunch of these tbh…
― ✖✖✖ (Moka), Thursday, 30 January 2025 01:19 (four months ago)
Also
Alicia Keys - Try sleeping with a broken heart
Lyrics aside, the verses sound like Prince and the chorus sounds like subpar Prince.
― ✖✖✖ (Moka), Thursday, 30 January 2025 01:32 (four months ago)
I'll second Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds. Always felt the verses deserved more than just shouting the song title in the chorus
― Zelda Zonk, Thursday, 30 January 2025 02:00 (four months ago)
don't necessarily think that repetition is necessarily a bad thing. the chorus to "roxanne" is repetitive, but it's also an incredible chorus.
Police were masters of the repetitive chorus. Personally I dug it, but live when every song incorporated Bob Marley’s “eee-aaa-oooh” thing it was insufferable.
― Glam conspiracist (Dan Peterson), Thursday, 30 January 2025 02:23 (four months ago)
Led Zeppelin - All My Love
Agree w/ Lucy in the Sky With Diamonds
Hard disagree w/ "Return of the Mack" and "Who Let the Dogs Out"
― Ubiquitor, Thursday, 30 January 2025 03:24 (four months ago)
Yeah the verses are seductive and mysterious and then POM POM POM POM the circus arrives (I don’t even hate the chorus and enjoy the big fat bassline but still…) !
― AlXTC from Paris, Thursday, 30 January 2025 07:36 (four months ago)
About “Lucy in the sky” !
― AlXTC from Paris, Thursday, 30 January 2025 08:30 (four months ago)
ELO - Livin' Thing
― bobot, Thursday, 30 January 2025 09:16 (four months ago)
the choruses to "Lucy in the Sky" and "Baby You're a Rich Man" are pretty similar
― fetter, Thursday, 30 January 2025 09:56 (four months ago)
I was thinking that too. But somehow the baby you're a rich man chorus fits with the verses a bit better to my ears, and I think it's the better song as well
― Zelda Zonk, Thursday, 30 January 2025 10:24 (four months ago)
Don't Talk To Me About Love by Altered Images
― giraffe, Thursday, 30 January 2025 10:42 (four months ago)
Funky Town was the first example i thought of too. the verses are glistening and the chorus is a major stumble.
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Thursday, 30 January 2025 10:42 (four months ago)
Crazy talk.
― Please play Lou Reed's irritating guitar sounds (Tom D.), Thursday, 30 January 2025 10:43 (four months ago)
For me personally I immediately have to think of ABBA - Gimme! Gimme! Gimme! and Queen - Radio Ga Ga. I don't really like either band to begin with, but with these songs, I like the build-up, the verses and bridges a lot; but I'm not a fan of the choruses at all.
― Valentijn, Thursday, 30 January 2025 11:49 (four months ago)
Always felt like this about Walking In My Shoes by Depeche Mode. Specifically the chords it goes to after the first line of the chorus feel like a meandering let down after a great verse / prechorus setup.
― Supposed Former ILM Lurker (WeWantMiles), Thursday, 30 January 2025 11:53 (four months ago)
Later day Oasis is rich in 'nice verse melodies, nothing choruses', and I guess that counts as highly generous round here
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Thursday, 30 January 2025 12:00 (four months ago)
Wizzard's See My Baby Jive doesn't quite lift in the chorus like I want it to, if anything it takes a step down. I Wish It Could Be Christmas Everyday is basically Roy giving it a second go and succeeding wonderfully.
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Thursday, 30 January 2025 12:03 (four months ago)
I've always been on the fence about the Carpenters' "Superstar". The chorus is kind of great but only because it's so bad, if you know what I mean.
Yet another 'minor key verse / major key chorus' candidate, no doubt normal people feel the opposite about these sort of songs.
― unboxing helena (Matt #2), Thursday, 30 January 2025 12:04 (four months ago)
For me personally I immediately have to think of ABBA - Gimme! Gimme! Gimme! and Queen - Radio Ga Ga. I don't really like either band to begin with, but with these songs, I like the build-up, the verses and bridges a lot; but I'm not a fan of the choruses at all.― Valentijn, Thursday, 30 January 2025 11:49 (forty-five minutes ago) bookmarkflaglink
― Valentijn, Thursday, 30 January 2025 11:49 (forty-five minutes ago) bookmarkflaglink
Yeah I agree. Similar thinking for Funkytown. I love the vocodered verse lines and the call-and-response with the little synth vamp, but then the chorus comes in and it's a bit lumpen
― the wedding preset (dog latin), Thursday, 30 January 2025 12:37 (four months ago)
But the chorus has the guitar riff.
― Please play Lou Reed's irritating guitar sounds (Tom D.), Thursday, 30 January 2025 12:41 (four months ago)
I think it annoys me because it's working up some sort of strange Kraftwerk-in-Minneapolis heat and then it switches to territory a bit more familiar. Usually I'm endeared by choruses that feel like they've wandered in from another song.
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Thursday, 30 January 2025 12:58 (four months ago)
I am otm re: gaucho not because its chorus is bad but because its verse is too good
― Vapor waif (uptown churl), Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:16 (four months ago)
― you can see me from westbury white horse,
otm -- one of the decade's most grating choruses
― the talented mr pimply (Alfred, Lord Sotosyn), Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:21 (four months ago)
"I Know What I Like (In Your Wardrobe)" is one of my mine. That might be a minority view.
― jmm, Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:38 (four months ago)
I wasn’t being serious with Who Let the Dogs Out, for a song so massively overplayed idk if people actually remember what the verses sound like!
― frogbs, Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:42 (four months ago)
wait are you all saying funkytown has a grating chorus. where am i
― ivy., Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:46 (four months ago)
Wasn't "Since U Been Gone" written based on this idea? i.e. Max Martin heard "Maps" and thought: that verse really builds up a lot of tension, but then kinda squanders it. What if it went big instead?
― enochroot, Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:50 (four months ago)
To be honest tho the verses of Who Lets the Dogs Out are the best bit! HEYIPPIEIYO
(Actually the best bit is the outro when the Spanish guitar comes in)
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Thursday, 30 January 2025 13:57 (four months ago)
― Lavator Shemmelpennick, Thursday, 30 January 2025 14:41 (four months ago)
I am glad there is already a lot of Police discussion in this thread, I def think of them as the patron saints of this phenomenon
― Vapor waif (uptown churl), Thursday, January 30, 2025 8:16 AM (one hour ago) bookmarkflaglink
No you are quite off the money, as Gaucho has one of the all-time great choruses.
― Iza Duffus Hardy (President Keyes), Thursday, 30 January 2025 14:57 (four months ago)
I'm struggling with imagining the chorus of "The Boxer" featuring a wordy Paul Simon disquisition on the ups and downs of pugilism
― Halfway there but for you, Sunday, 2 February 2025 15:26 (four months ago)
the chorus is where we would’ve found out the boxer is a dog
― what angers me about the smurfs these days (voodoo chili), Sunday, 2 February 2025 15:27 (four months ago)
I've always felt that "photograph, I don't want your..." was the weakest part of that Def Leppard song.
― henry s, Sunday, 2 February 2025 15:45 (four months ago)
Cheap Trick, "He's a Whore". Kind of goes nowhere in the chorus, they could have dropped it tbh then given the song a better title.
― have all the experiments been conducted now? (Matt #2), Sunday, 2 February 2025 16:09 (four months ago)
I didn't actually realise that Cameo's "Word Up" had a chorus until I read the lyrics.
For the first time in about twenty years I remembered "I Wish I Could Fly" by Roxette. I remember liking it a lot when it was new - the orchestral arrangement wasn't what I expected from that band. It has a lovely bit about two and a half minutes in that only lasts for about eight bars. The video has a nipple! But the chorus just sort of emerges from the verse and doesn't have enough variation to stand out. It uses the same "dah-dah-dah-dah / dah-dah-dah-dah / dah-dah-dah-DAH / dah-dah-dah-dah" vocal rhythm throughout, which gets boring. And the middle eight sounds overblown.
Along the same lines as "Funkytown", I'm going to pick Rick James' "Super Freak". The verses and great! But the chorus makes the song grind to a halt, and it doesn't fit the rhythm. Also, the verses big up the subject of the song as a fun lady to be around - but then "she's alright!". What? She's alright? I don't want to hang out with a woman who's alright. I want to hang out with someone who has major emotional issues who likes motorcycles.
I mean, she's not super-terrific or excellent or great. She's just alright. Is she a super freak or not? Can I take her home to mother, or not? I have so many questions for Rick James. So many questions.
― Ashley Pomeroy, Sunday, 2 February 2025 16:47 (four months ago)
I too have questions. In fact, I started a thread years ago in an effort to determine what exactly were the "new wave magazines" referred to in the lyrics. I was an avid consumer of the music press in those days (Creem, Circus, Trouser Press, Sounds, etc. and what have you) but have no recollection of magazines that primarily focused on the "new wave."
― henry s, Sunday, 2 February 2025 17:14 (four months ago)
I just now realized what he really means by “Room 714, I’ll be waiting” in “Super Freak.”
714 was the number that used to be on Quaaludes.
― Josefa, Sunday, 2 February 2025 18:59 (four months ago)
Damn, all these decades I thought he said she was the kind you read about in Newsweek magazine.
― braunschweiger winter (Eazy), Sunday, 2 February 2025 19:06 (four months ago)
Tears For Fears "Head Over Heels"
Lots of Bacharach songs have unspeakably strong verses with comparatively disappointing choruses ("Always Something There To Remind Me", "I Say A Little Prayer")
One of the best melodies you can sing is a simple descending scale over a minor tonic. If you put it in your verse then your chorus is certainly fucked (Weezer "Hash Pipe", Gwen Stefani "What You Waiting For")
― Necka Mormon (flamboyant goon tie included), Sunday, 2 February 2025 19:09 (four months ago)
what! say a little prayer is an all time chorus!!!
― what angers me about the smurfs these days (voodoo chili), Sunday, 2 February 2025 19:21 (four months ago)
for tff, “mad world” fits better than “head over heels”
― what angers me about the smurfs these days (voodoo chili), Sunday, 2 February 2025 19:22 (four months ago)
Idk re “Prayer” the chorus is all top-of-the-singer’s range and the syllabic rate jumps precipitously. I like “San Jose” and “The Look Of Love” over songs with zero chill on their choruses
― Necka Mormon (flamboyant goon tie included), Sunday, 2 February 2025 21:30 (four months ago)
As for “Mad World” I measure the chorus as starting at “and I find it kinda funny…” and it’s v cool afaic
“Head Over Heels” has a totally nice chorus it’s just that the synth hook and verse melody are so incredibly beautiful
― Necka Mormon (flamboyant goon tie included), Sunday, 2 February 2025 21:32 (four months ago)
Head Over Heels is good all the way through, sorry
― the wedding preset (dog latin), Sunday, 2 February 2025 21:54 (four months ago)
I've always felt that "photograph, I don't want your..." was the weakest part of that Def Leppard song.― henry s, Sunday, February 2, 2025 7:45 AM (six hours ago)
― henry s, Sunday, February 2, 2025 7:45 AM (six hours ago)
that's the only memorable part!
i swear i think i live in this thread's bizarro world.
― alpine static, Sunday, 2 February 2025 22:45 (four months ago)
Idk re “Prayer” the chorus is all top-of-the-singer’s range and the syllabic rate jumps precipitously. I like “San Jose” and “The Look Of Love” over songs with zero chill on their choruses.
I would argue that *is* the whole point of the chorus (assume we’re talking about Dionne’s version, which I am probably in the minority for preferring over Aretha’s). The power of the song for me is that you have this woman going about her daily life, doing routine tasks, and yet all these *passionate emotions* are roiling around inside of her, and the sudden stridency and desperation of the vocals and lyrics in the chorus captures that.
It also helps that the outro of the song *is* very chill, so it goes out on a serene (but not untroubled) note…
― gjoon1, Sunday, 2 February 2025 22:59 (four months ago)
― sarahell, Monday, 3 February 2025 00:15 (four months ago)
Speaking of Paul Simon.
“50 ways to leave your lover”
Steve Gadd drumming on the verses is iconic, the lyrics paired with those chords that sound like they keep descending is very heartbreaking.
… and then enters the funky, childish chorus and ruins it all.
― ✖✖✖ (Moka), Monday, 3 February 2025 01:30 (four months ago)
There must be ... fifty ways to let the dogs out HOO. HOO HOO HOO
― budo jeru, Monday, 3 February 2025 01:34 (four months ago)
sorry if i started a thread that is causing pain to some posters, but it really is very interesting to see what ppl think fits this paradigm. many of these are deeply otm imo but i think we're all going to hear things somewhat differently
I was thinking that the Who's "can't explain" is a good example of a near miss -- if the chorus had gone on any longer, it would be a real drag and kill the momentum, but the fact it cycles through that progression only once and then gets back to the amazing verse riff makes it kind of genius
― budo jeru, Monday, 3 February 2025 01:37 (four months ago)
“There must be ... fifty ways to let the dogs outHOO. HOO HOO HOO”
And everyone would know what I was barking about. Everyone would know exactly what I was barking about.
― Iza Duffus Hardy (President Keyes), Monday, 3 February 2025 03:12 (four months ago)
thought of a great one: I Me Mine
― budo jeru, Saturday, 22 February 2025 23:02 (four months ago)
Good Times, Bad Times is a near miss. pretty underwhelming chorus but it thankfully doesn't overstay its welcome
― budo jeru, Saturday, 22 February 2025 23:03 (four months ago)
― budo jeru, Saturday, February 22, 2025 5:02 PM (four minutes ago) bookmarkflaglink
it's actually kind of astounding when you think about it. there's this awesome, serpentine, creepy, foreboding melody and build-up into ... the beatles just taking a steaming hot blues rock shit on top of it all
― budo jeru, Saturday, 22 February 2025 23:10 (four months ago)
but maybe it's not fair to take shots at album tracks from Let It Be, lol
Verse is so so good, but then... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NGxA9fkVryA
― PaulTMA, Sunday, 23 February 2025 01:28 (four months ago)
"I Me Mine" is about as good an example of this as I can imagine, and your description is exactly otm. I can get with a lot of the blues rock by numbers stuff scattered across Let It Be and Abbey Road but that chorus is just completely devoid of inspiration.
"Good Times Bad Times'" chorus basically exists as a lead in to the awesome turnaround on the bass solo breakdown afaic. Its construction is actually pretty fascinating all over the place -- there's this iconic, screamed out first verse that has a super catchy melody and riff, but then rather than go back to either of them, he kinda speak-sings the second verse ("Sixteen I fell in love.."). The riff comes back in the outro, and the vocal melody never returns. Then possibly the peak of the song is the... bridge? "I know what it means to be alone"? Would you call that part the bridge? And then the triumphant end is mirroring the intro rather than a return to the chorus (probably a good hint that the chorus is indeed the weakest part of the song). Kind of feels like lightning in a bottle, sounds simultaneously as firmly stereotypical a classic rock song as there could be and yet nothing else sounds remotely like it.
― Lavator Shemmelpennick, Sunday, 23 February 2025 04:36 (four months ago)
and, i must add (though folks are presumably aware), that ^^^ is album 1 track 1. damn.
― Lavator Shemmelpennick, Sunday, 23 February 2025 04:40 (four months ago)
While I have Zep on my mind and this thread open, what do folks think about "Going to California"? To me it firmly fits here, but I can easily imagine those for whom the chorus is what elevates it from just a beautiful folk song to give it that darker, witchy Zep vibe. For me the verse is so achingly gorgeous that the shrillness of the chorus outweighs that effect, and certainly it doesn't have a comparable melody to justify itself imo.
― Lavator Shemmelpennick, Sunday, 23 February 2025 04:44 (four months ago)
This one may be sacrilege but I always thought of « Good Vibrations » that way : the verses and all the rest deserve all the praises this song ever received. And then there’s the chorus, which is fun but…
― AlXTC from Paris, Sunday, 23 February 2025 05:06 (four months ago)
that's a great example too yeah
― corrs unplugged, Sunday, 23 February 2025 07:22 (four months ago)
Steely Dan "Josie" verses: brutal vamp groove ("Green Onions" smoothed out) with one of ChRainey's sickest bass lines ever loaned to the SD catalog, plus A++ lyrics
Steely Dan "Josie" chorus: a yawn, a whimper, a turnaround... with abysmal lyrics along the lowest lights of Fagan's career.
― Mrs. Ippei (Steve Shasta), Sunday, 23 February 2025 07:35 (four months ago)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppQUJOCsxj0
― Mrs. Ippei (Steve Shasta), Sunday, 23 February 2025 07:38 (four months ago)
"...Gwen Stefani "What You Waiting For""
I completely missed it when it was new, but isn't the vocal melody on the verse borrowed from "Somewhere in My Heart" by Aztec Camera? But perhaps it was deliberate given that the album had a retro sound. I don't know. The chorus is an afterthought.
"Good Times Bad Times" sounds as if the band was trying to squeeze their sound into three minutes, as a kind of "this is what you're going to get over the course of the rest of our career" sampler.
― Ashley Pomeroy, Sunday, 23 February 2025 19:58 (four months ago)
Descending four-note scales as melodies pop up a lot. Major key, over I, starting on the tonic: "Silent All These Years". Major key, over IV, starting on the tonic: "Going To California", that Pearl Jam song ("Given To Fly" I think?). But the particular Gwen/Weezer thing is in a minor key, over i, starting on the fifth-- exactly the same melody, really. I've said this before but you can't really claim plagiarism over such basic bitch melodic devices. "You are my sun and my moon" is a common enough sentiment to have become PD, same with a melody that is a scale descending
― 🎶are we falling in dog?🎶 (flamboyant goon tie included), Sunday, 23 February 2025 21:23 (four months ago)
Oh I know that Aztec song but it's also major key, would verify the pitch choice but I don't wanna watch another Youtube ad rn
― 🎶are we falling in dog?🎶 (flamboyant goon tie included), Sunday, 23 February 2025 21:24 (four months ago)
I don't hear choruses in "Going to California" or "Josie", I would call them bridges, and thus hold them to lower standards.The break in "I Me Mine" was originally only played once, it was Spector who repeated it so it went from bad to worse.
― Halfway there but for you, Monday, 24 February 2025 02:35 (four months ago)
I don't hear choruses in "Josie", I would call them bridges
...
I know this board attracts some "I'm so unique" characters but lol c'mon my dude
― Mrs. Ippei (Steve Shasta), Monday, 24 February 2025 04:12 (four months ago)
Bear with me, but this random guy talks about how the entire song was formulated, written and arranged:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yWJ11H4TdbI
ffwd to 5m32s when he talks specifically about the chorus
― Mrs. Ippei (Steve Shasta), Monday, 24 February 2025 04:14 (four months ago)
― beard papa, Monday, 24 February 2025 08:06 (four months ago)
I thought of this song straight away. But yes, the shrill bit is more of a bridge.
― Sam Weller, Monday, 24 February 2025 10:07 (four months ago)
Always thought the chorus - or bridge - of Lady Friend by the Byrds doesn't match the sublime verses.
― Ward Fowler, Monday, 24 February 2025 10:20 (four months ago)
I was thinking about this, and Joy Division's "Warsaw" came to mind: really intense and intriguing verses, but then for the chorus, just a shouted "3-1-G". Sumner is playing a sick riff underneath, so I feel like Curtis could have done more with it.
― Vast Halo, Monday, 24 February 2025 11:11 (four months ago)
Bringing it to mind, it sounds like "Popscene" blur.
It probably doesn't, really, but
― Mark G, Monday, 24 February 2025 15:05 (four months ago)
We're actually saying the same thing, you're saying it's a weak chorus and I'm saying it's not a chorus because it's not strong enough. The hook is obviously in the verse, who is going to start singing "she's the raw flame" when asked "how does 'Josie' go?" I'll defer to Fagen that they considered this the chorus, and I suppose to them the bridge is the instrumental staccato bit right afterwards.
― Halfway there but for you, Monday, 24 February 2025 15:42 (four months ago)
Let's be friends and call it a "bridgy chorus".
― Halfway there but for you, Monday, 24 February 2025 15:53 (four months ago)
Pink Pony Club
Is there a name for this lazy kind of chorus? I've always gotten the ick with it, I'm sure there are hundreds of examples - where it's essentially the song title repeated or chanted with little melodic variation.
― kinder, Monday, 24 February 2025 17:18 (four months ago)
re joy division's warsaw. remake/remodel came on the shuffle yesterday and i thought of how it and warsaw are both track 1 first album/1st ep songs with a chugga chugga and obscure reference chanted number chorus.
― mig (guess that dreams always end), Sunday, 2 March 2025 17:35 (three months ago)
xpost Yeah, like "Green Eyes" by Husker Du. Beautiful song and verses, but pretty lazy chorus.
― Josh in Chicago, Sunday, 2 March 2025 17:40 (three months ago)
re Josie no it’s not a chorus, do you know what a chorus is? Unique characters for sure!
― brimstead, Sunday, 2 March 2025 17:51 (three months ago)
marshall crenshaw "whenever you're on my mind" and (maybe) joe jackson "steppin' out"
both of which have choruses that borrow from parts of the song you've already heard without really moving beyond what you've already heard. "steppin' out" is still a sweet, uplifting chorus on its own, thus the "maybe," but i'm not sure it delivers on what the intro and verses promise.
― fact checking cuz, Sunday, 2 March 2025 21:20 (three months ago)
choruses that borrow from parts of the song you've already heard
Might it not be fair to say that Jackson was employing a variation of the "start the song with the chorus" strategy? Before the first verse, the intro develops the chorus melody in an instrumental form. Then, when the chorus proper rolls around, you get the payoff of hearing it put to words. "Steppin' Out" to me has always been an exemplar of pop craftmanship at its very finest.
― Vast Halo, Sunday, 2 March 2025 22:02 (three months ago)
One of the things that turned me off early solo Morrissey was that he had a peculiar knack, or rather Stephen Street had a peculiar knack, because he wrote the music, or rather he had a lack of a knack... and yet "Everyday is Like Sunday" has a perfectly serviceable chorus, so perhaps it was deliberate. Who knows.
Lack of a knack for choruses. Choruses. e.g. "Suedehead" has a great verse, but it meanders. "I'm so sorry" feels more like punctuation than a proper chorus. "Interesting Drug" has a fantastic first verse, up until "they're saving their own skins / by ruining other people's lives", and then the entire rest of the song just seems to meander all over the place.
I mean, the melody of "there are some baaaaaad people on the rise" is simple and effective, but it's only used right at the start. Which is a shame because it's fantastic. It's the only Morrissey song that would work as a duet with Kate Pierson. But the rest of the song abandons it in favour of what sounds like vocal improv. It's just a big missed opportunity.
― Ashley Pomeroy, Sunday, 2 March 2025 22:03 (three months ago)
This in itself as a device in pop/rock is as much an issue as repetition - ie. not at all and something intrinsic to the form; the issue is how it is used
Hart sings the chorus to “Green Eyes” in a particularly poignant/wistful way to match the guitar and Crenshaw sings the chorus “Whenever You’re On My Mind” as a bright, melodic standalone phrase which is then complemented with the “I leave the world behind” line.
The above examples aren’t an issue as the writers complement the chorus melody with something that fits, thus making the song even better
― Master of Treacle, Monday, 3 March 2025 10:03 (three months ago)
"josie" is absolutely a chorus, and it's such a cool chord progression that i don't care that it is basically just a turnaround.
funny thing, post-katy lied dan songs don't really have vocal bridges
― gestures broadly at...everything (voodoo chili), Monday, 3 March 2025 15:23 (three months ago)
josie is a good variant of happy music sad lyric oxymusic, it’s tense verses with happy mellow chorus that hints at violence and chaos. peg is sweet, deacon is bitter, josie is a tricky in between. a very satisfying conclusion.
― mig (guess that dreams always end), Tuesday, 4 March 2025 04:45 (three months ago)
I feel like “Kyrie” by Mr Mister might fit in this category - verses imply something really epic might be coming, then the chorus comes along and it’s just thoroughly mid
― trm (tombotomod), Thursday, 6 March 2025 23:40 (three months ago)
I am only bringing this up because it just played in the silly sports bar that we are dining in tonight
― trm (tombotomod), Thursday, 6 March 2025 23:42 (three months ago)
"We Gotta Get Out of This Place" - The Animals
To a lesser extent the chorus of "Stand" by Sly Stone always feels weak to me compared with the insanely awesome verses.
― bookmarkflaglink (Darin), Friday, 7 March 2025 00:00 (three months ago)
this might earn my some FPs but "For What It's Worth" by BuffSpringf... feel like SS could have been a little less passive and gone a little harder to make his point.
― Mrs. Ippei (Steve Shasta), Friday, 7 March 2025 00:06 (three months ago)
the strut of “Love is the Drug” is so perfect in anticipating tense 80s post punky new wave, but then has that has 60s harmony turnaround that breaks the spell, that it is just right that it came out in 1975. And in 1980, Grace Jones and Sly and Robbie fixed it for the 80s, glossing over the spell-breaking part, letting it be the relentless groove monologue it wants to be.
― Theracane Gratifaction (bendy), Friday, 7 March 2025 01:08 (three months ago)
Not sure what point Stills could go harder on. The song is pretty conflicted ("Nobody's right if everybody's wrong." "Mostly say 'Hurray for Our Side.'")
― Iza Duffus Hardy (President Keyes), Friday, 7 March 2025 15:55 (three months ago)
Subterranean homesick alien - really thoughtful verses about aliens & alienation with lovely melodic guitars, then thom yorke just belting 'uptight!'
― birming man (ledge), Friday, 7 March 2025 16:00 (three months ago)
This is another example of a lot of the songs in this poll where the chrous taken on its own terms is fine (see also Funkytown), but coming off the verse feels a bit awkward and lumpen. You've got this incredibly funky intro with an irresistible bassline and light, shuffling, portentous rhythm (see Funkytown again), and it builds and builds - there's some real tension and excitement going on there. But then the chorus comes crashing into the room, the drums switch to a much less interesting and much more plodding gate, like a sprinter who's had to shift gait due to a change in terrain, and the dynamism of the vocal shifts to a repetitive chorus that is memorable but also a bit grating.
― the wedding preset (dog latin), Friday, 7 March 2025 16:09 (three months ago)
*gait twice
Eh, the "Funkytown" chorus rules, because of that pretty dramatic shift from frothy to full-on strut. Like, you wanted to get to Funkytown? Well now you're there!
― Josh in Chicago, Friday, 7 March 2025 16:15 (three months ago)
I love the way the shift down to F acts as a release from the pedal G of the verses...but here again, the chorus is obviously serving a different structural and dynamic role than it does in, to pick an obvious example, "Creep".
― Halfway there but for you, Friday, 7 March 2025 16:26 (three months ago)
It's no 'all time verse' (it is good tho) but considering it's the song that comes to mind every time I see this thread bumped: Robbie Williams' Strong. For some reason it's Millennium's chorus that Robbie has more of a problem with.
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Friday, 7 March 2025 16:51 (three months ago)
"Love is the Drug" is the most convincing of these so far.
― thuringer spring (Eazy), Friday, 7 March 2025 17:01 (three months ago)
But is that really the chorus?
― Iza Duffus Hardy (President Keyes), Friday, 7 March 2025 17:06 (three months ago)
Funkytown chorus when the string stabs come in >>>>>>
― Mrs. Ippei (Steve Shasta), Friday, 7 March 2025 17:10 (three months ago)
I always think it would be nice to cover "My Wandering Days Are Over" on guitar.
I love the lines "I'm tired of listening to myself now / I'm tired of fixing things for Michael and the rest of them".
And I especially like the bit where he sings "You said it was a living hell / You said you were in hellll"
But then the chorus is all about a circus boy and a "disenchanted poney" and what the fuck? It goes on for ages too
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Saturday, 26 April 2025 09:36 (one month ago)
I heard 'Bette Davis Eyes' in the supermarket this morning and thought of this thread
― Maresn3st, Saturday, 26 April 2025 10:27 (one month ago)
Mylo's In My Arms is a total rescue operation
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Saturday, 26 April 2025 12:23 (one month ago)
Vast Halo OTM re: Steppin’ Out… I think it works beautifullyI also agree about that Belle & Sebastian song
― hypothetical rogue notary (morrisp), Saturday, 26 April 2025 13:44 (one month ago)
As my contribution to this thread, I’ll submit R.E.M.’s “Can’t Get There From Here”
― hypothetical rogue notary (morrisp), Saturday, 26 April 2025 14:59 (one month ago)
(great bridge in that song, too)
― hypothetical rogue notary (morrisp), Saturday, 26 April 2025 15:00 (one month ago)
in it for the money by supergrass is chock full of really great verses with lackluster choruses that sound more like middle 8s. i want to believe that they just ran out of time.
― brimstead, Saturday, 26 April 2025 15:01 (one month ago)
oh and dog latin otm, re wandering days!
― brimstead, Saturday, 26 April 2025 15:02 (one month ago)
I like the "Can't Get There From Here" chorus, but mainly for Mills's "I've been there, I know the way" backing vocals. Stipe's parodic fusion of Mainer and Southerner is right on the edge of being annoying but it works for me more than some of his other efforts in that vein.
― Doctor Casino, Saturday, 26 April 2025 15:17 (one month ago)
ut then the chorus is all about a circus boy and a "disenchanted poney”
when your favorite lyrical trope is 'the story of a beautiful underachiever’s embarrassing minor failures' you’d better really deliver, this is not a forgiving genre
but just when you thought the song was completely ruined, it dissolves into a dubiously jammy outro.
it was a good verse, they just couldn’t find a way out.
― doe on a hill (Deflatormouse), Sunday, 27 April 2025 04:27 (one month ago)
I mean... whenever I try to play it on guitar I get a frog in my throat (really!) during the "you said you were in hell" because that line is so bathetic and narratively unreliable and sort of sad, then I get to the chorus and realise I've got to just do this lousy silly thing for ages and I just peter out. "Michael and the rest of them...", that is amazing work. It's such a shame. Other than that it's among my faves of theirs
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Sunday, 27 April 2025 04:33 (one month ago)
sometimes the verse is over and you just gotta make a break for it
― doe on a hill (Deflatormouse), Sunday, 27 April 2025 04:35 (one month ago)
The Libertines' Can't Stand Me Now, a stock choice for 'good song by an otherwise terrible band'. In fact I've rolled back round to enjoying it as much as I did at the time (important summer 2004 memories you see) but the chorus is still nothing. Which is distracting because there's a melancholy to most of the track which holds an extra weight with me.
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Monday, 28 April 2025 13:33 (one month ago)
I don't expect anyone will agree with me, but "Day Tripper". The key change into the chorus is fine, but each bit of the melody is weaker than the next, and every single time I hear "and I found out" I picture Lennon doing a Groucho Marx impersonation, wiggling a cigar and waggling his eyebrows.
― Halfway there but for you, Monday, 28 April 2025 14:06 (one month ago)
the vocals on the verses of "Day Tripper" aren't exactly great either. that's a song that's carried pretty much entirely by the guitar riff and ringo's drumming.
― budo jeru, Monday, 28 April 2025 15:19 (one month ago)
I don't expect anyone will agree with me, but "Day Tripper". The key change into the chorus is fine, but each bit of the melody is weaker than the next, and every single time I hear "and I found out" I picture Lennon doing a Groucho Marx impersonation, wiggling a cigar and waggling his eyebrows.― Halfway there but for you, Monday, April 28, 2025 10:06 AM (one hour ago) bookmarkflaglink
― Halfway there but for you, Monday, April 28, 2025 10:06 AM (one hour ago) bookmarkflaglink
i have no strong disagreement with your adding this song to the thread, but tbrr i can't imagine how that groucho imagine doesn't make you love it! i hope to call it to mind next time i hear day tripper
― Lavator Shemmelpennick, Monday, 28 April 2025 15:46 (one month ago)
another point against the chorus, as i have noted elsewhere a day tripper would definitely buy a return ticket.
― constant gravy (ledge), Monday, 28 April 2025 15:53 (one month ago)
Rihanna's "Hard" might qualify here - absolutely overflowing with ideas except when the chorus kicks in. It keeps the momentum up but that's about all I can say for it.
― Doctor Casino, Monday, 28 April 2025 20:22 (one month ago)
― constant gravy (ledge), Monday, 28 April 2025 15:53 (five hours ago)
no but thats because they are talking about drugs
― doe on a hill (Deflatormouse), Monday, 28 April 2025 21:04 (one month ago)
I was gonna say..
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Monday, 28 April 2025 21:22 (one month ago)
I can't say I agree with Day Tripper because it's pretty much an ABAB song where the verse and the chorus are connected in a way that make them parts of the same thing. Man, the Beatles were so on form at that part of their careers
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Monday, 28 April 2025 21:26 (one month ago)
it also has the virtue of having a very short chorus so we can get right back to the awesome guitar riff
― budo jeru, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 01:50 (one month ago)
If we're going to say anything about it, it's the riff that dominates the song and everything else just kowtows to it
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 09:25 (one month ago)
I can't say I agree with Day Tripper because it's pretty much an ABAB song where the verse and the chorus are connected in a way that make them parts of the same thing.
Yes, a funny thing about the Beatles is how few songs with genuine choruses they have, and when they do have proper choruses they're often cheesy/terrible. Mostly their songs have the bit that functions as a chorus at the end of and in essence part of each verse, a kind of verse/chorus structure really, rather than a verse and a separate chorus. She Loves You is a famous example of a great chorus, but if I try to think of other songs with sections that are undeniable, standalone choruses, the ones that come to mind are Lucy (again) but then also Maxwell's Silver Hammer, Bungalow Bill, Ob-La-Di etc. Just glancing at the White Album tracklisting here for a representative sample and the only other pure choruses on that apart from the songs I just mentioned are in Don't Pass Me By and Cry Baby Cry. Case closed.
― Eyeball Kicks, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 10:43 (one month ago)
True, never thought of it that way. What is the chorus of Strawberry Fields, for example? It's just a line tacked on the end of a long, meandering verse. Mind you, Penny Lane, which is a lot more of a traditional song, definitely does
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 11:24 (one month ago)
do blues songs have genuine choruses? do led zeppelin songs have genuine choruses? do cole porter songs?
― fact checking cuz, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 13:59 (one month ago)
Lucy in the sky with diamondsLucy in the sky with diamondsLucy in the sky with diamonds
is, by any definition I know, a chorus.
― Allen (etaeoe), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:10 (one month ago)
that doesn't come close to delivering
― corrs unplugged, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:13 (one month ago)
a funny thing about the Beatles is how few songs with genuine choruses they have
True, but "Day Tripper" and "Strawberry Fields Forever" absolutely have explicit choruses. The verse of the latter is "Living is easy with eyes closed...".
― Halfway there but for you, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:15 (one month ago)
yeah but "strawberry fields" is still that a-b-a-b pattern that dog latin was describing
― gestures broadly at...everything (voodoo chili), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:18 (one month ago)
Yeah I was wondering how SFF could be considered chorusless
― AlXTC from Paris, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:19 (one month ago)
Xpost ah I see the idea
I'd agree if we were talking about "I Want to Hold Your Hand", I don't feel it in the two I mentioned above. I mean of course a verse and chorus should dovetail naturally, that's one of the skills of songwriting.
― Halfway there but for you, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:34 (one month ago)
Yeah the Lucy chorus is kind of not great compared to the verse...
What is the Strawberry Fields Forever chorus? Is it just the bit where he sings the title of the song? Or is it the "Let me take you down..." part? Maybe because the song starts with that part I have difficulty thinking of it as a chorus. But I guess there are a few Beatles songs that go straight in with the chorus
― DLC Soundsystem (dog latin), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:34 (one month ago)
don't love that this thread like all others has become a beatles thread. but...
there are a lot of beatles songs with traditional choruses: "can't buy me love," "yellow submarine," "i am the walrus," "here comes the sun," "come together," "get back," "with a little help from my friends," "drive my car," etc. etc.
― gestures broadly at...everything (voodoo chili), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:38 (one month ago)
lol wtf
― budo jeru, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:39 (one month ago)
“Octopus’s Garden” (everyone’s fave)
― hypothetical rogue notary (morrisp), Tuesday, 29 April 2025 14:51 (one month ago)
"I'd Have You Anytime"
― Vaguely Threatening CAPTCHAs, Tuesday, 29 April 2025 22:34 (one month ago)
Led Zeppelin - "Out On The Tiles"
― Paul, Wednesday, 30 April 2025 00:07 (one month ago)
andy williams "can't get used to losing you." a nice chorus, just not the chorus the amazing tense jittery verse was setting you up for.
― fact checking cuz, Monday, 2 June 2025 05:30 (three weeks ago)
My contribution to this be "Something for the girl with everything" Sparks.
― Mark G, Monday, 2 June 2025 06:26 (three weeks ago)
My answer to this question is always "Photograph" by Def Leppard. And then I get hollered at.
So go ahead, kick this ass. I'm not asking, I'm telling.
― henry s, Monday, 2 June 2025 12:15 (three weeks ago)
I don't know how to break these things down in terms of proper music theory, but Photograph seems to have 4 distinct melodic sections: A) First part of verse ("I'm outta luck, outta love...")B) Second section of verse. Or maybe pre-pre-chorus? ("I see your face every time I dream...")C) Pre-chorus ("Oh, look what you've done to this rock 'n' roll clown...")D) Chorus ("Photograph / I don't want your / Photograph....")
I'd rate these as C > D > B > A
― enochroot, Tuesday, 3 June 2025 02:49 (three weeks ago)
B >>>>>>> A > C = D
― imperial frfr (Steve Shasta), Tuesday, 3 June 2025 02:57 (three weeks ago)
Possible contender: Appleton - FantasyMostly for the contrast between weird juddering in the verses and the airiness of the chorus. It feels like the former is going to set up something that kicks a lot harder than what ends up coming. It's the change in drums I think.
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Tuesday, 3 June 2025 21:16 (three weeks ago)
Perfect example of this i can't believe i never said it before
The Beach Boys - It's Gettin' Late
― you can see me from westbury white horse, Wednesday, 11 June 2025 16:19 (two weeks ago)
with all due respect to Steve Shasta, there is no universe in which enochroot's "A" section of Photograph is better than the "D" section. that is an absolutely mind-boggling opinion.
― alpine static, Wednesday, 11 June 2025 18:12 (two weeks ago)
I gotta say, after hearing "Rock of Ages" on the radio over the weekend, there's another song with a pretty tight verse/bridge, and a fairly lumpen-by-comparison chorus.
― henry s, Wednesday, 11 June 2025 18:45 (two weeks ago)
depends which choir is singing it
― Iza Duffus Hardy (President Keyes), Wednesday, 11 June 2025 19:49 (two weeks ago)
I heard "Young Folks" playing in a restaurant a couple of days ago and it immediately made me think of this thread.
― o. nate, Friday, 20 June 2025 18:01 (five days ago)
No Action by Elvis Costello and the Attractions.
― kornrulez6969, Saturday, 21 June 2025 01:31 (four days ago)
Not quite the same, but whenever I get the song "O, Dana" by Big Star stuck in my head, it's always the verse "I got busted across the bridge / they rounded up every soul / now I'm on the East Side," which has this plaintive weirdness to it that I find much more memorable than the fairly generic rock chorus (also good though).
― Lily Dale, Saturday, 21 June 2025 02:25 (four days ago)