Raymond Carver is a loser

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i loathed this film but it's been so long i'm not sure i can tell you why.

jed_ (jed), Monday, 15 November 2004 22:20 (nineteen years ago) link

god I love that film! and I used to love carver (or did for a while anyway). Short Cuts is probably the best literary adaptation for film I've seen.

kyle (akmonday), Monday, 15 November 2004 22:24 (nineteen years ago) link

I didn't loathe it, but I didn't like it much. Carver and Altman might have seemed like a good match, and it doesn't surprise me Altman was a Carver fan, but their sensibilities and personalities really don't mesh very well. As I recall, only the Lyle Lovett/bakery sequence seemed to really inhabit anything like Carver's universe, and even that one works a lot better in the story than the movie.

gypsy mothra (gypsy mothra), Monday, 15 November 2004 22:28 (nineteen years ago) link

i thought the tom waits/ lily tomlin scenes were closest but still made me furious i seem to remember!

jed_ (jed), Monday, 15 November 2004 22:37 (nineteen years ago) link

"I didn't loathe it, but I didn't like it much. Carver and Altman might have seemed like a good match, and it doesn't surprise me Altman was a Carver fan, but their sensibilities and personalities really don't mesh very well."

From what I can recall reading somewhere, Altman wasn't really a fan of Carver's. He was in desperate need of a good script (contractual obligation with the studio), and a producer friend of his gave him Short Cuts as a present, suggesting him to adapt it to film. He loved it, and as such, initiated that little endeavor. But yes, you're right, their sensibilities don't really fit together, I don't think.

a (Francis Watlington), Monday, 15 November 2004 23:43 (nineteen years ago) link

i read the story Cathedral for the first time since the 80's a while back and it just took my breath away. what a barnburner. i had forgotten what he could do with a story.

scott seward (scott seward), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 01:03 (nineteen years ago) link

I just read it again this morning (before I saw this thread) and had the same reaction.

estela (estela), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 01:05 (nineteen years ago) link

did you get a chance to read any Yates, estela? i finally read A Fan's Notes by Exley since this thread. Another good one in the beautiful loser canon.

scott seward (scott seward), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 01:09 (nineteen years ago) link

Scott, I've read some of Yates's short stories- thanks for the recommendation- and I have Revolutionary Road lined up to read. He's brilliant.
He makes me nervous.

estela (estela), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 02:11 (nineteen years ago) link

Yeah, he makes me cringe like Carver. But in a good way. I think. (I get so embarrassed for their characters.) The first chapter of Revolutionary Road is one of the most perfect things I have ever read. It staggered me.

scott seward (scott seward), Tuesday, 16 November 2004 03:51 (nineteen years ago) link

two years pass...

So, Anyone read this in the Times yesterday? The edits are really interesting.

The edits are available to look through here

http://www.nytimes.com/packages/pdf/Carver.pdf

I dunno, I think Lish was a great editor. He really cuts down on the B.S. I think his edit of "One More Thing" is terrific. I also think the "controversy" is pretty funny--I'm sure this book will come out, eventually one way or another.

Mr. Que, Thursday, 18 October 2007 15:57 (sixteen years ago) link

I was going to post yesterday and forgot.

Don't see the big deal. The power of good editors is overstated. Maxwell Perkins hacked at Thomas Wolfe's books and didn't approve them.

Alfred, Lord Sotosyn, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:04 (sixteen years ago) link

I would say that the edits Lish made make a case that the power of good editors is understated.

Mr. Que, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:08 (sixteen years ago) link

Carver was a good writer already.

Alfred, Lord Sotosyn, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:09 (sixteen years ago) link

I think I read the original draft of "A Small Good Thing" in a college fiction class.

jaymc, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:09 (sixteen years ago) link

From the looks of the edits, he was even more of a sappy sentimental writer than I thought he was.

Mr. Que, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:10 (sixteen years ago) link

I also happened to read, this morning, a story I wrote when I was 16 that is almost ridiculous in how much it owes to Carver.

jaymc, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:12 (sixteen years ago) link

please post, jaymc.
i also want to read yancey's poem.

i like raymond carver, and it's all thanks to gygax (RIP.)

ian, Thursday, 18 October 2007 16:31 (sixteen years ago) link

i realize i may be talking to myself at this point, but this article is fantastic

http://query.nytimes.com/gst/fullpage.html?res=9F03E3D71F38F93AA3575BC0A96E958260&sec=&spon=&pagewanted=all

Mr. Que, Friday, 19 October 2007 18:40 (sixteen years ago) link

eleven months pass...

Of Carver's work, I've only read "A Small, Good Thing." It's really amazing. Where do I go next?

Tape Store, Sunday, 21 September 2008 05:31 (fifteen years ago) link

To A Relative Stranger by Charles Baxter.

Eazy, Sunday, 21 September 2008 05:37 (fifteen years ago) link

I think you could do a lot worse than just reading Where I'm Calling From, which has most of his best and famous stories, and then, if you're still curious, going to the individual collections to fill in the cracks.

jaymc, Sunday, 21 September 2008 05:38 (fifteen years ago) link

'cathedral' is beautiful (from the same-titled collection).

your ass is (Rubyredd), Sunday, 21 September 2008 06:09 (fifteen years ago) link

i always liked this one. it's mawkish, but whatever.

tipsy mothra, Sunday, 21 September 2008 07:16 (fifteen years ago) link

The whole Lish sage in re: Carver is pretty fascinating

http://www.boston.com/ae/books/articles/2007/12/19/talking_about_editing_ray_carver/

exHOOS my back! (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Sunday, 21 September 2008 09:25 (fifteen years ago) link

READ IT ALL!

I know, right?, Sunday, 21 September 2008 10:42 (fifteen years ago) link

Drinking While Driving by Raymond Carver

It's August and I have not
Read a book in six months
except something called The Retreat from Moscow
by Caulaincourt
Nevertheless, I am happy
Riding in a car with my brother
and drinking from a pint of Old Crow.
We do not have any place in mind to go,
we are just driving.
If I closed my eyes for a minute
I would be lost, yet
I could gladly lie down and sleep forever
beside this road
My brother nudges me.
Any minute now, something will happen.

I know, right?, Sunday, 21 September 2008 10:43 (fifteen years ago) link

sorry if I've already said this 10,000,00x but I saw him give a reading at Reed in either '85 or '86 - dude had it working

J0hn D., Sunday, 21 September 2008 12:29 (fifteen years ago) link

Thanks, everyone!

Tape Store, Sunday, 21 September 2008 15:20 (fifteen years ago) link

I like that poem, but it's in the exact same meter and format as a lot of great James Wright poems.

I wrote my undergrad thesis on Carver (as well as David Mamet and Susan Rothenberg, two other late-70s/early-80s who made a similar major shift in their work from fragmented essentialism to a fuller, connection-based style), and I treated him with reverence in high school and college, but I've become much more conflict about his work in the years since. I'd love to be blown away again by a poem or story of his.

Eazy, Sunday, 21 September 2008 21:30 (fifteen years ago) link

late 70s/early 80s artists
...much more conflicted

Eazy, Sunday, 21 September 2008 21:32 (fifteen years ago) link

wait Eazy what meter is that poem in

J0hn D., Sunday, 21 September 2008 21:56 (fifteen years ago) link

Lying in a Hammock at William Duffy's Farm in Pine Island, Minnesota

Over my head, I see the bronze butterfly
Asleep on the black trunk,
Blowing like a leaf in green shadow.
Down the ravine behind the empty house,
The cowbells follow one another
Into the distances of the afternoon.
To my right,
In a field of sunlight between two pines,
The droppings of last year's horses
Blaze up into golden stones.
I lean back, as the evening darkens and comes on.
A chicken hawk floats over, looking for home.
I have wasted my life.

*

OK, OK, not meter.

Eazy, Sunday, 21 September 2008 22:09 (fifteen years ago) link

I wrote my undergrad thesis on Carver (as well as David Mamet and Susan Rothenberg, two other late-70s/early-80s who made a similar major shift in their work from fragmented essentialism to a fuller, connection-based style),

It's interesting how James Wright's development was in the other direction, no?

Alfred, Lord Sotosyn, Sunday, 21 September 2008 22:35 (fifteen years ago) link

His line breaks are so perfect, he just holds ideas an arms length away from each other, like here:

I could gladly lie down and sleep forever
beside this road

I know, right?, Sunday, 21 September 2008 22:41 (fifteen years ago) link

I admire Carver but he's too depressing to compel me to spend a lot of time with him.

calstars, Monday, 22 September 2008 01:43 (fifteen years ago) link

one year passes...

READ IT ALL!

― I know, right?, Sunday, 21 September 2008 10:42 (1 year ago) Permalink

OTM

Yonder Mountain Zing Band (Tape Store), Saturday, 24 April 2010 03:52 (fourteen years ago) link


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