Give me some examples so I know what to avoid, or alternatively, know where to broaden my horizons.
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 14:28 (twenty-three years ago)
― mark s (mark s), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 14:33 (twenty-three years ago)
― Sarah (starry), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 14:36 (twenty-three years ago)
― g-kit (g-kit), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 14:38 (twenty-three years ago)
Muscular prose, I don't think I like. It reeks too much of Hemmingway. (i.e. fish and sweat and scotch)
― kate, Tuesday, 5 November 2002 14:41 (twenty-three years ago)
― Sarah (starry), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 14:43 (twenty-three years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 15:15 (twenty-three years ago)
― Marcello Carlin, Tuesday, 5 November 2002 15:19 (twenty-three years ago)
― Tim Bateman, Tuesday, 5 November 2002 17:30 (twenty-three years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 17:44 (twenty-three years ago)
― g (graysonlane), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 17:54 (twenty-three years ago)
― g (graysonlane), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 17:55 (twenty-three years ago)
No.
― Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 18:08 (twenty-three years ago)
― Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 18:09 (twenty-three years ago)
― g (graysonlane), Tuesday, 5 November 2002 18:14 (twenty-three years ago)
I was just showing someone at work the mechanics of ILx posting and updating, using this thread as a random example.
Ulysses really doesn't have muscular prose, by the way.
― Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Sunday, 10 November 2002 16:24 (twenty-three years ago)
― the pinefox, Thursday, 24 April 2003 11:34 (twenty-two years ago)
But its title, and author, were promising.
― the prosefox, Monday, 12 April 2004 11:04 (twenty-one years ago)
I'm doing my worst, here.
― Ally C (Ally C), Monday, 12 April 2004 19:38 (twenty-one years ago)
― the bellefox, Monday, 12 April 2004 19:45 (twenty-one years ago)
― Ally C (Ally C), Monday, 12 April 2004 19:47 (twenty-one years ago)
I guess that what N. was getting at was something in the prose itself.
It's tough, innit?
It's thorny, this. It's muscly.
Could one possibly demonstrate that many sentences in eg Sinclair's LIGHTS OUT were, in some sense, muscular?
Granted, muscular is a 'metaphor' - but to say that feels circular.
― the mailfox, Monday, 12 April 2004 19:49 (twenty-one years ago)
― the pinefox, Monday, 12 April 2004 19:49 (twenty-one years ago)