Great first or last lines of poems

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I'm very bored and I think we should do this.

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 13:53 (twenty-two years ago)

I just found

The Frost performs its secret ministry

and then realised that the last line is pretty shivery too

Quietly shining to the quiet Moon

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 13:55 (twenty-two years ago)

listenin' to bobby timmons does not encourage abstinence

H (Heruy), Monday, 9 June 2003 13:57 (twenty-two years ago)

Turning and turning in the widening gyre

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:00 (twenty-two years ago)

though it may look like (Write it!) like disaster.

Aaron A., Monday, 9 June 2003 14:00 (twenty-two years ago)

I felt a funeral in my brane

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:12 (twenty-two years ago)

"And then the Bible was closed"

- Ken Maher

DV (dirtyvicar), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:16 (twenty-two years ago)

"I'm the one without."

from Richard Meltzer's "Shit is the one with flies on it."

Horace Mann (Horace Mann), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:19 (twenty-two years ago)

Where any-angled light
Would congregate endlessly

- Philip Larkin, last 2 lines of Water

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:20 (twenty-two years ago)

did we have to come this way down before we got to

'let us go then you and i
when the evening is stretched out against the sky
like a patient etherised upon a table...'

piscesboy, Monday, 9 June 2003 14:53 (twenty-two years ago)

Ooh yeah.

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:54 (twenty-two years ago)

I don't know if this is from a poem or a book, but does anyone know where this comes from:

"Will the rain never stop?"

Ben Mott (Ben Mott), Monday, 9 June 2003 14:56 (twenty-two years ago)

STC's Frost At Midnight = top choice, Archel.

First notable closer that came to mind was

Fall, gall themselves, and gash gold-vermillion.

Mooro (Mooro), Monday, 9 June 2003 15:06 (twenty-two years ago)

Not a first or last, but I still love the line "On the marge of Lake Labarge" from The Cremation of Sam McGee, because I always replace "Lake Labarge" with "El Debarge" in my head. Okay, that was completely pointless. Carry on.

Sean Carruthers (SeanC), Monday, 9 June 2003 15:20 (twenty-two years ago)

I only vaguley recognise that line David - reads like Hopkins? (Gerald M. rather than Tim...)

Archel (Archel), Monday, 9 June 2003 15:40 (twenty-two years ago)

"reads like" = is.

Gerald Manley rather than Tim Manlier.

Mooro (Mooro), Monday, 9 June 2003 15:49 (twenty-two years ago)

Of all the stars I admired, drenched in various rivers and mists,
I chose only the one I love.

luna (luna.c), Monday, 9 June 2003 15:58 (twenty-two years ago)

hopkins "i wake and feel the fell of dark not day"

matthew james (matthew james), Monday, 9 June 2003 16:06 (twenty-two years ago)

"The sun is full of ice and gives no warmth at all" - Willie Nelson.

Martin Skidmore (Martin Skidmore), Monday, 9 June 2003 17:09 (twenty-two years ago)

One could do worse than be a swinger of birches.
frost

Her body is not so white as/
anemone petals nor so smooth
wcw

There is a girl inside.
She is randy as a wolf.
Lucile Clifton

Say shit, say death, say fuck the father
Sharon Olds

Poetry is the Supreme Fiction, madame
Wallace Stevens

soft rainsqaulls on the swells
Gary Synder

For love-I would
split open your head...
Creeley

Having A Coke With You
is even more fun than going top San Sebastain, Irun, Hendaye, Biarritz, Bayonne
Frank O Hara

anthony easton (anthony), Monday, 9 June 2003 17:17 (twenty-two years ago)

There once was a man from Nantucket...

(various)

I just don't know where to begin....

(Elvis Costello)

chuck, Monday, 9 June 2003 17:30 (twenty-two years ago)

For Rener

And her voice coming softly over the meadow
Was the mist becoming rain.

Austin Clarke

Lara (Lara), Monday, 9 June 2003 21:00 (twenty-two years ago)

You must change your life. - Rilke

Rage works if reason won't.
When locked up, bear down. - May Swenson


bnw (bnw), Monday, 9 June 2003 21:15 (twenty-two years ago)

oh Lana Turner we love you get up - Frank O'Hara


The quiet that comes to a house
where nobody can sleep.- Raymond Carver

estela (estela), Monday, 9 June 2003 21:22 (twenty-two years ago)

I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by madness, starving hysterical naked,

dragging themselves through the negro streets at dawn looking for an angry fix

(first two lines of "Howl" by Ginsberg)

Trayce (trayce), Monday, 9 June 2003 21:38 (twenty-two years ago)

They fuck you up, your mum and dad.
...
Get out as early as you can and don't have any kids yourself.
-Larkin

Justyn Dillingham (Justyn Dillingham), Monday, 9 June 2003 22:11 (twenty-two years ago)

"wee"

-E.E. Cummings

Curt1s St3ph3ns, Monday, 9 June 2003 22:16 (twenty-two years ago)

Come friendly bombs and fall on Slough! It isn't fit for humans now. There isn't grass to graze a cow. Swarm over, death!

...

Come friendly bombs and fall on Slough, to get it ready for the plough. The cabbages are coming now; The earth exhales.

Andrew Farrell (afarrell), Monday, 9 June 2003 22:36 (twenty-two years ago)

the wind wept rose in the shell of my ear

keith (keithmcl), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 00:15 (twenty-two years ago)

You are my sun, my moon, and all my stars

- e.e. cummings

Damn I love that one, I'm such a sap.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 00:28 (twenty-two years ago)

The poet is a faker
Who's so good at his act
He even fakes the pain
Of pain he feels in fact.

Fernando Pessoa

s1utsky (slutsky), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 00:42 (twenty-two years ago)

After great pain, a formal feeling comes--
The Nerves sit ceremonious, like Tombs--

Emily Dickinson

s1utsky (slutsky), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 00:46 (twenty-two years ago)

Aha! The thread I'd die for (all of these choices are last lines):

"after a time the grave got up and went away"

Roy Fisher

"I said you've still got your earrings on
she said I know it's part of the plan"

Cliff Yates

"tonight, he said, tonight I could die
one pound fifty five, I said"

Eric B Rakim

There are any number of first and last lines of Tom Raworth and Rob MacKenzie peoms that rip my guts out but I can't find the texts in the bombsite that is my room. And Bill Griffiths owns everything < /poetry geek>


Matt (Matt), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 01:28 (twenty-two years ago)

Darn it! Piscesboy, you stole (or, rather, just saved my fingers from all of the exertion of having to type them) my favorite opening lines.

So here's my other contribution:

There are strange things done in the midnight sun,
By the men who moil for gold.
The arctic trails have their own strange tales,
That would make your blood run cold.
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
But the queerest they ever did see...
Was the night on the marge of Lake LeBarge that I cremated Sam McGee.

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 03:03 (twenty-two years ago)

"About suffering, they were never wrong the old masters"
"Come live with me and be my love"
(I am the bigger sap)
"She was poor but she was honest"
"world is a glorious cycle of song"
"

and as a last line: "love is a growing or full constant light and its short minute after noon is night"

isadora (isadora), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 03:48 (twenty-two years ago)

Just to be all goth:

Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I'm through.

- Plath

(not my fave Plath poem by any stretch but a great last line)

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 03:55 (twenty-two years ago)

Again and again, however well we know the landscape of love
-Rilke

People Who Do Things exceed my endurance;
God, for a man that solicits insurance!

-Dorothy Parker

You stay, somehow, my friend
Who grips me tightest in her open hand.

-Michael Donaghy

Archel (Archel), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 07:22 (twenty-two years ago)

Ooh I like that last one Archel.

Trayce (trayce), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 09:41 (twenty-two years ago)

Check out the whole poem then Trayce, it rocks:

Glass

This is a cheapjack gift at the years end.
This is a double-glazing hymn for wind.
This is a palm frond held out to a friend
Who holds her lifeline lightly in her hand.

As fine sand filaments the unclenched hand
Or leaves the palm grit-filmed but crazed, lines end
Across prismatic windscreens. Every friend
A meteorologist's diagram of wind.

Blow smoke into the fist of either hand
And pull it tight and loop it round the end
of every night held up by wine and friend,
Sootflecked and leaning on a London wind.

Then say our ribboned smoke's erased by wind,
Our glass is sand. You start, but in the end,
Somehow, I stay. You stay, somehow, my friend
Who grips me tightest in her open hand.

Archel (Archel), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 09:45 (twenty-two years ago)

"Not with a bang but a whimper."

g--ff c-nn-n (gcannon), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 12:17 (twenty-two years ago)

"how do you like your blueeyed boy mr death?"

isadora (isadora), Tuesday, 10 June 2003 19:42 (twenty-two years ago)

"Listen my children and you shall hear"

"The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed upon cloudy seas"

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 03:36 (twenty-two years ago)

(Er, this is from memory, and I know it's off a bit)

"'Twas brillig and the slivey toves
Did gire and gimble in the wabe..."

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 03:37 (twenty-two years ago)

"I am worn out with the effort of trying to love people and not suceeding"

isadora (isadora), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 03:38 (twenty-two years ago)

I think that the last three lines of Prufrock are ruined by the rest of the pome:

"We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
By sea-girls wreathed with seaweed red and brown
Till human voices wake us, and we drown."

I'm by no means a poetry consumer but I recently heard one of Berryman's "Dream Songs" read aloud and " Fancy the brain from hell
/ held out so long. Let go."

Leee (Leee), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 05:19 (twenty-two years ago)

She stood breast high amid the corn ...


Share my harvest and my home


I don't know why I like this poem (Ruth, by Thomas Hardy) so much - it's very plain, and not even particularly 'accomplished'. Does anyone else like Thomas Hardy's poetry?

Jody C., Wednesday, 11 June 2003 06:01 (twenty-two years ago)

"I have wasted my life"
-- James Wright

weatheringdaleson (weatheringdaleson), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 06:39 (twenty-two years ago)

Love again: wanking at ten past three
(Surely he's taken her home by now?),
The bedroom hot as a bakery,
The drink gone dead, without showing how
To meet tomorrow, and afterwards,
And the usual pain, like dysentery.

Sam (chirombo), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 07:07 (twenty-two years ago)

Good call with The Highwayman. Has anyone heard those old British Library recordings they've released on CD? (I think we might have talked about them before actually.) The Alfred Noyes is one of the high points for sheer momentum and drama.

Archel (Archel), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 07:25 (twenty-two years ago)

kak dai vam Bog liubimoi byt' drugim

("...as God may grant you to be loved by another.") - Pushkin


..and thou art distant in humanity

Stanza 39 of "Isabella,or the Pot of Basil" - Keats

cameron, Wednesday, 11 June 2003 07:58 (twenty-two years ago)

"I should have took it off before and worn the frying pan."

Tim (Tim), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 08:17 (twenty-two years ago)

Your spring and your day are wasted in play and your winter and night in disguise

Blake, Nurses Song (Experience)

Does it for me, every time.

Jamie Conway (Jamie Conway), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 08:22 (twenty-two years ago)

"and one man loved the pilgrim soul in you" (not a first line or a last line -just a line)

kayT (kaytee), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 09:27 (twenty-two years ago)

"Though they be mad and dead as nails,
Heads of the characters hammer through daisies;
Break in the sun till the sun breaks down,
And death shall have no dominion."

-Dylan Thomas

Tuomas (Tuomas), Wednesday, 11 June 2003 09:36 (twenty-two years ago)


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