― jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:11 (twenty-one years ago)
― hstencil, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:14 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:16 (twenty-one years ago)
― @d@ml (nordicskilla), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:18 (twenty-one years ago)
x-post
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:19 (twenty-one years ago)
― pete s, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:19 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:20 (twenty-one years ago)
― @d@ml (nordicskilla), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:20 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:21 (twenty-one years ago)
One movie I saw not too long ago that was really guilty of this horseshit was Wonder Boys, where the narration was either gratuitous (do you have to say where you are headed if I can see you pulling into the goddamn DRIVEWAY???) or a cover-up (let's have Douglas say how much he loves McDormand in voice-over cuz frankly no one would be able to tell from their non-chemistry).
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:21 (twenty-one years ago)
― Donna Brown (Donna Brown), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:22 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:23 (twenty-one years ago)
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:24 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:25 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:26 (twenty-one years ago)
actually this works because the audience would take him at his word without the narration, because of the acting, etc. But WITH the narration we realize that he didn't realize he was tellign the truth until he said so. I dont think the effect would be quite the same without the voiceover.
― ryan (ryan), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:28 (twenty-one years ago)
― pete s, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:28 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:29 (twenty-one years ago)
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:31 (twenty-one years ago)
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:34 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:36 (twenty-one years ago)
I haven't seen Adaptation, N. What did they say about voiceovers in that?
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:37 (twenty-one years ago)
I'm not sure if it's a failing in L.A. Confidential or not.
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:38 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:42 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:48 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:49 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:49 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:57 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 00:58 (twenty-one years ago)
― oops (Oops), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:02 (twenty-one years ago)
― Dan Selzer (Dan Selzer), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:07 (twenty-one years ago)
I missed it when they took it out. But I think that whole director's cut was a sham. So is metric, and so is stereo: sham.
― andy, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:13 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:14 (twenty-one years ago)
― andy, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:16 (twenty-one years ago)
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:16 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:16 (twenty-one years ago)
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:18 (twenty-one years ago)
― andy, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:21 (twenty-one years ago)
― Anthony Miccio (Anthony Miccio), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:23 (twenty-one years ago)
See, I disagree with both of these. Douglas' character is a writer (cue Rip Torn: "I... ... ... ... am a WRITER.") who clearly takes himself a little too seriously (see 'under the influence' preaching to the choir, or Katie Holmes, schpiel) and is used to having Godlike monologues make sense of things in his head. Of course, nobody can hear these monologues but him, so to everybody else he just looks like a ridiculous fuckup. Which he is.
― Dave M. (rotten03), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:27 (twenty-one years ago)
― brian patrick (brian patrick), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:30 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:31 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:31 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:32 (twenty-one years ago)
― Dave M. (rotten03), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:38 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:43 (twenty-one years ago)
― captain gay, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 01:49 (twenty-one years ago)
― nickalicious (nickalicious), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 21:45 (twenty-one years ago)
xpost -- Days of Heaven?
― Kingfish Cowboy (Kingfish), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 21:47 (twenty-one years ago)
I think the VO work in Lebowski actually sorta set the scene like an old-timey cowboy movie with The Dude as the loner hero, Donnie as the scrappy kid, etc.
― nickalicious (nickalicious), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 21:49 (twenty-one years ago)
― nickalicious (nickalicious), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 21:50 (twenty-one years ago)
― amateur!st (amateurist), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 21:51 (twenty-one years ago)
― nickalicious (nickalicious), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 21:52 (twenty-one years ago)
"Locusts! There's locuts on the racetrack!"
― Kingfish Cowboy (Kingfish), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:06 (twenty-one years ago)
― the babefox, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:09 (twenty-one years ago)
"as i recall those were played like he was telling a story he had heard."
Except, the narrator fell silent in those scenes. And how would he know that much detail? For me, a voiceover by an onscreen character implies that he or she sees and is present at what occurs.
― Bunged Out (Jake Proudlock), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:24 (twenty-one years ago)
How about movies where the narrator is an incognito celebrity, i.e. John Malkovich in Alive or John Larroquette in Texas Chainsaw Massacre?
― Pleasant Plains (Pleasant Plains), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:31 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:39 (twenty-one years ago)
― ailsa (ailsa), Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:42 (twenty-one years ago)
Good screenwriters can use voice over appropriately. Malick would be a good example. But poor screenwriters use it as a crutch when they have no other way to get across their ideas. When I hear a voice over nowadays (and it's far more common than you think), it immediately raises a question in my mind -- why? And that can be a huge hurdle for a film because it allows for little critical middle ground. It's rare to find an "OK voice over". In other words, the answer to the "why" question is almost always going to be "because it's a poor screenwriter using it as crutch for his inability to show and not tell" or "it's a great writer using it delicately and carefully to elaborate on his ideas". VO puts me in a defensive state ready to love it or hate it. Maybe I should just try and ignore it more.
― Brian Tallerico, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 22:57 (twenty-one years ago)
― sexyDancer, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 23:09 (twenty-one years ago)
Fellowship of the Ring
― juju, Tuesday, 23 March 2004 23:17 (twenty-one years ago)
― otto, Wednesday, 24 March 2004 00:42 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 03:38 (twenty-one years ago)
― Dave M. (rotten03), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 05:54 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 05:55 (twenty-one years ago)
― Donna Brown (Donna Brown), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 07:01 (twenty-one years ago)
― Dickerson Pike (Dickerson Pike), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 09:27 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 09:41 (twenty-one years ago)
― the babefox, Wednesday, 24 March 2004 14:54 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 15:01 (twenty-one years ago)
This discussion reminds me of the beginning of Stephanie Zacharek's review of Big Fish on Salon and the old showing-vs-telling problem:
Why are people always gassing on about the power of stories when it's so much more effective just to knuckle down and tell one already? We don't need a shaman to inform us that good stories are powerful. But since the '90s, at least, in both books and movies, there's been a marked trend toward reminding us just how important stories are, instead of just laying them on us, the old-fashioned way.
We get wordy preambles -- often delivered by a wise elder, usually a Southerner -- about how stories tell us who we are and where we've been. In a state of innocent hopefulness, we wait to hear the tale: Who knows? It might actually be good. But more often than not it turns out to be some magic-realism baloney about a giant fish in a stream or some similarly numbing metaphor for the unpredictability of life, or the brevity of life, or the importance of taking chances in life -- choose your own larger meaning and insert it here. Maybe the story would have been OK without the big windup. Then again, maybe it needed the advance advertising campaign because it wasn't such a great story to begin with.
I'm not interested in starting a discussion of Big Fish, but I think her criticism here and the extent to which the audience is overtly made conscious of "telling" is one of the main problems with VO in general. VO often brings an omniscient narrator to the film or endows the narrating character with a little too much knowledge and wisdom to be credible when we'd rather just trust the camera lens to give us a window into the story. In print, we're more comfortable with a narrator, omniscient or limited, to serve as the primary mode of storytelling (and this is almost certainly why VO often creeps into film adaptations of novels as well as films with storybook frames). In film (unlike the narrator in a novel), VO is obvious and difficult to ignore, and, like almost anything that can be categorized as a "device," it can get clunky in the hands of anyone who isn't skilled.
― alexandra s (alexandra s), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:24 (twenty-one years ago)
― o. nate (onate), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:27 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:36 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:43 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:44 (twenty-one years ago)
― Gear! (Gear!), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:46 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:47 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:49 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:50 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:50 (twenty-one years ago)
― Gear! (Gear!), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:52 (twenty-one years ago)
― jaymc (jaymc), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 17:59 (twenty-one years ago)
― amateur!st (amateurist), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:37 (twenty-one years ago)
― amateur!st (amateurist), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:38 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:39 (twenty-one years ago)
― sexyDancer, Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:42 (twenty-one years ago)
― o. nate (onate), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:43 (twenty-one years ago)
i meant to say "you've thought"
― s1ocki (slutsky), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:44 (twenty-one years ago)
― Chuck Tatum (Chuck Tatum), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 20:48 (twenty-one years ago)
Like Last Year In Marienbad?
― N. (nickdastoor), Wednesday, 24 March 2004 22:04 (twenty-one years ago)
It would be harder to do that on film--voice recognition would make it too obvious if the VO is done by a major character (unless the character is silent until the end of the film or something). It could work if the VO is the character as an old man/woman played by another actor and the film is a flashback. A film adaptation of Atonement seems primed for that trick.
― alexandra s (alexandra s), Thursday, 25 March 2004 14:25 (twenty-one years ago)
― s1ocki (slutsky), Thursday, 25 March 2004 14:50 (twenty-one years ago)
― Kingfish Hypercolor (Kingfish), Thursday, 25 March 2004 15:31 (twenty-one years ago)
― N. (nickdastoor), Thursday, 25 March 2004 15:37 (twenty-one years ago)
http://www.avclub.com/articles/oh-im-chasing-this-guy-no-hes-chasing-me-34-essent,36890/
― Hoisin Murphy (jaymc), Sunday, 17 January 2010 16:19 (sixteen years ago)
The 1970s Ed Gein film Deranged actually had an onscreen narrator, he was great. Every so often he'd wander on in the middle of a scene to tell us what Ed was thinking, wearing a jacket with leather elbow patches as I recall it.
― Ork Alarm (Matt #2), Sunday, 17 January 2010 22:43 (sixteen years ago)