Give me ideas for a gore short film about happy slapping

i'd prefer to have the happy slappers get their comeuppance.

charvers = lumpenproleteriat

i am readin trotsky's the fight against fascism in germany, can you tell?

Eventually he falls silent. They Chavs turned their bloodied heads in the direction of the youn man's companion, a scared young woman frozen in the near distance.

The Chavs approach her zombie like. Her terror is evident in her face.

ACT TWO
Her same face is seen in close up. As the camera pulls back, we see her and her boyfriend (the victim in Act One) walking in the park, near the playground. She is holding a balloon.

They are laughing and joking and walk hand in hand. As the approach the play area, they see the group of Chavs.

Alerted by the smell and sound of fresh victims, the Chavs rise and walk towards the couple, surround them, torment them. One of them removes his 3G phone and begins to film their terrorizing.

Still encircling the couple, the boyfriend is felled and a brutal series of kicks to his abdomen and head ensues. This is shown with horrifying realism. As the violence esaclates the POV moves out of the circles and frames the action some distance away from the circle of Chavs.

We see the Girl on the ground, crawling slowly backwards using her hands. She manages to move away from the Chavs. We can see the Chavs tearing flesh off the arms and neck of the boyfriend, clearly dead.

The Chav with video phone turns around and sees the Girl, attempting to escape. Emitting imbecilic zombie chav noises, he gets the attention of the gorging chavs. They look up from their fresh corpse and see the terrified girl.

The Chavs approach her zombie like. Her terror is evident in her face.

ACT THREE
The Chavs begin to approach the girl, who is still on the ground, attempting to scuttle away but her fight or flights responses stunned by what she has just seen. The Chavs walk slowly towards hers, forming almost a diamond shaped attack formation.

The leading Chav nears the girl, begins to get down on his knees - arms outstretched in front of him, babbling away with bloodlust.

The Girl screams, scrambling backwards but reaches a row of bushes that prevent her escape. The Chav zombie's hands approach her neck, and trap in it a vice like grip.

I have decided to have all the zombie chavs killed. By a cultured vampire type.

ow ow ow ow too much funny

http://media.ebaumsworld.com/index.php?e=carfall.wmv

its pretty horrible. This guy looks like he is trying to slap a cyclist from a car but falls out of the moving car and into the path of another car.

watch these; i'd actually be interested in hearing of people's immediate reactions upon seeing this, especially immediately post-slap.

happy slap 1 .avi file. 1.77MB

happy slap 2 .wmv file. 0.78 MB