― the pinefox, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
― Stevie Nixed, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
― Dr. C, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
― gareth, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
― duane z., Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
I'm not sure about that. There's not that much 'craft' around, at least not the kind of craft I have in mind.
But maybe he could be really low-ranking in the union hierarchy. His fees are paid cos he makes tea for President Bacharach and General Secretary Wilson at the union meetings.
― Sean Carruthers, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
Dude, that's harsh! I get bored by a lot of singer/songwriter stuff, but I'm sure there's a way to like what they do without being a doompatrol type.
― Patrick, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
As someone who has written songs for about ten years now (not that that really qualifies me to talk on the subject) I think it's definitely a mixture of the two elements, technical and emotional. You might say this about anything in life, though. There is a lot of technical hard work to Jimmy Webb's technique; for example, he will make lists of rhymes from rhyming dictionaries, considering every possibility, and he understands the mathematical structure of melodies. However, I think choosing the correct rhyme or melody is almost always an emotional judgement, although it may be tempered by technical boundaries. For example, Webb (like many 'conventional' songwriters) looks down on half-rhymes; he would never rhyme 'time' and 'line'. Unfortunately, there aren't any rules on which actual rhyme is better: 'line' and 'mine' or 'line' and 'fine'? It's an emotional choice made by the writer, depending on the lyrical structure and emotions/places he's trying to convey.
I sometimes think a crafted song is similar to a joke. Jokes usually build up two or more constrasting ideas and the punchline ties them together. Making new connections in the brain gives us pleasure, and jokes are an intense form of that pleasure. Songs can be similar; every twist and turn that a song makes presents a new idea, a new connection, and often these can be compounded by linking them to a familiar idea, thus strengthening that familiar idea in the brain. The craft is in balancing the familiar with the new and interesting.
People like old jokes, too, though; the rush isn't as intense, but the familiar feeling is pleasant, and telling an old joke probably brings back other memories of when you first heard it. Therefore it doesn't necessarily surprise me that Elvis Costello and Elton John rush to praise Ron Sexsmith; his songwriting style is similar to the craftsmanship of Jimmy Webb and many pre 1970 songwriters who Elvis and Elton would have grown up with. That might not be the case, however, for many people in our generation.
― John Davey, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
― Tim, Tuesday, 12 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
>>> As someone who has written songs for about ten years now (not that that really qualifies me to talk on the subject)
I imagine that maybe it does qualify you to talk about Whatever It Is That You Do (presumably you don't write songs of 'every' kind). I don't mean by that, though, that anyone who doesn't write songs isn't equally in a position to talk about them.
>>> There is a lot of technical hard work to Jimmy Webb's technique; for example, he will make lists of rhymes from rhyming dictionaries,
Well, I am in favour of rhyming dictionaries. But they are like thesauri in that you often find that you knew all the relevant words already!
>>> considering every possibility, and he understands the mathematical structure of melodies.
I wonder if you can tell me what you mean by The Mathematical Structure of Melodies. I like the sound of it a lot. But I'm not sure I get it yet. (Leopold Bloom says something like 'Numbers all it is' in the middle of a meditation on music. I don't suppose he got it either.)
>>> For example, Webb (like many 'conventional' songwriters) looks down on half-rhymes; he would never rhyme 'time' and 'line'.
I'm afraid that I am not in favour of this as a 'technical' rule. I'm surprised that a songwriter as experienced as Jimmy Webb (about whom I know little, save that many rate him) would adhere to such a dubious and limiting rule. If anything, I have come to think that one thing that writing loads of songs teaches you is how to use pararhymes - what non-rhymes will work; how close you have to be, how far you can get away with. Using a tonally appropriate pararhyme is a lot better, usually, than using a full-on rhyme just for 'technical' reasons even though it spoils the lyric by introducing a new register (idiom, if you like). The one way in which I am in favour of such 'sheer technicalities' would be re. what I (just about) understand by 'formalism' - the setting of deliberate limits as exercises. (I'm not sure if this is really Formalism as others understand it, though. And my definition above might as well be Classicism. But I think you know what I mean - try writing a song which never once uses the word 'I', for instance.)
>>> Unfortunately, there aren't any rules on which actual rhyme is better: 'line' and 'mine' or 'line' and 'fine'? It's an emotional choice made by the writer, depending on the lyrical structure and emotions/places he's trying to convey.
I daresay I agree with this. But note that all four words are very neutral, very average, very uncontroversial. The real problem - the time you're taking risks - is when you use a word like 'Florentine' or 'Columbine' instead. Very easy to do when you've got a Rhyming Dicto - too easy, in fact. I distrust 'This is like Cole Porter' stuff for this reason - it is easier to write a silly line which uses an outlandish word than really work for the right word. (That's no criticism of CP himself, of course.)
>>> Therefore it doesn't necessarily surprise me that Elvis Costello and Elton John rush to praise Ron Sexsmith; his songwriting style is similar to the craftsmanship of Jimmy Webb
Sorry, I don't see this. This is precisely what I was trying to say upthread - that I don't see the Craftsman aspect in RS, that it's a bit of a myth. The detail that I imagine Webb goes into is surely very different from whatever it is that RS has to offer.
― the pinefox, Friday, 29 June 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)
― beth, Sunday, 19 August 2001 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)