Mock-academic essays...what do I do with them?

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I've been working on some essays on pop music that are meant to be satirical, though they could very easily be taken straight. They're not so much a satire of the music as the critical apparatus around it. Of course, I realize I risk being called condescending in my treatment of the music. (Though I primarily write fiction, so I don't really see it as "me." This is a voice.) Anyway, here's a sampling of one. Let me know what you think and if you have any ideas about publication venues for it and its ilk:

The Revelation Will Not Be Televised:
Marxist Undertones in Loverboy’s “Working for the Weekend”

Loverboy forward an aggressively Marxist agenda through the figurative Trojan Horse of their song “Working for the Weekend.” They successfully co-opt the aesthetic and sentiments of the ruling class, with which to undermine those values all the better. The song is a call-to-arms, facilitated equally by its proactive didactic as well as its driving rhythm and tense, near-dissonant synthesizer riff. We shall look primarily at the linguistic transformations and appropriations employed in the band’s critique.

Each verse begins with the word “everyone,” connoting solidarity among the band’s audience. However, Loverboy invite their audience to remain vigilant of themselves, so ensure that this new majority doesn’t replicate the faults of the old power structure. The word “everyone” undergoes a remarkably subtle, but unmistakable, shift over the course of the first verse. It begins, “Everyone’s watching to see what you will do /Everyone’s looking at you.” This clearly evokes the image of an Orwellian police-state, under which all citizens are subject to scrutiny and thus a loss of privacy. But then we find, “Everyone’s wondering will you come out tonight /Everyone’s trying to get it right.” The sense of scrutiny lingers in the third line, though with a palpably different tone. Rather than purposely looking for transgressions, the watcher is hopeful that the subject will act, will “come out tonight.” This reading is confirmed by the last line, in which the decision to “come out tonight” is plainly associated with “get[ting] it right.” Just as Loverboy appropriate the idiom of officially sanctioned rebellion – the mainstream rock “party song” – so too they reclaim the paranoia instilled by an oppressive regime in its citizens. This paranoia, they recognize, cannot be so easily squelched. But it can be redirected toward a different and more egalitarian end.

The song’s characterization of the weekend is worth closer examination. Mentioning “the weekend” situates the song firmly within a capitalist framework. However, if “[e]verybody’s working for the weekend,” then the work that comprises the week must be unfulfilling. Here and throughout the song, Loverboy elicit their audience’s sympathy in order to redirect its energy toward a higher aim; they speak to the audience’s present situation in order to contrast it against the band’s utopian revolutionary vision. None, presumably, would argue that he does not look forward to the weekend, as his work is unsatisfying. Yet, in the context of the song, the weekend comes to stand for a socialist ideal, a state in which the unfulfilling drudgery of capitalism has been eradicated. This is an ideal toward which “everybody” can strive, not just the elite.

Further, the band puns on the word “weekend,” almost showing their hand when they say, “Everybody’s working for the weak end.” The workers do not realize that they are the ones with the true power in a capitalist economy; thus the bosses are the “weak end” of the system of production. Loverboy once again state the more obvious fact – that’s everybody’s working for the “weak end” – in order to direct their audience toward the loftier goal of working for the “weekend” – the end of meaningless work. They intend to remind the workers that they, finally, are the strong, and that they must come together for the “weak’s” “week” to “end.”

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:14 (twenty-one years ago) link

I hope I don't sound like an asshole...sigh.

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:14 (twenty-one years ago) link

I've been working on some essays on pop music that are meant to be satirical, though they could very easily be taken straight. They're not so much a satire of the music as the critical apparatus around it. Of course, I realize I risk being called condescending in my treatment of the music. (Though I primarily write fiction, so I don't really see it as "me." This is a voice.)

how depressing of you

M Matos (M Matos), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:22 (twenty-one years ago) link

Thanks!

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:25 (twenty-one years ago) link

I thought it was aquite brilliant analysis, very persuasive. I note some Freudian implications too, Prude, that you mysteriously overlooked, or repressed, in your analysis of the 'weak end' unconscious pun. Of course, 'weak end' is what you get after you've taken it up the a** for your employer. I think some unpacking of the tacit sadomasochistic contract inmvolved in having permanent employment could certainly be worth examining. Perhaps, too, Foucault's kinkier writings might help here.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:25 (twenty-one years ago) link

send them to Social Text.

keith (keithmcl), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:28 (twenty-one years ago) link

Good point. "Weak end" could also correspond to male impotency as a metaphor for an outmoded economic model. So, then, not only does the worker have a "weak end" after being violated by the boss, but the boss himself has a "weak end."

(I can post the rest of it, if you like. There's about another page.)

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:31 (twenty-one years ago) link

like "mock" usually implies "funny" right?

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:33 (twenty-one years ago) link

That's great Prude, you really should consider studying with the Tavistock Clinic. And now, I must get down to work, as the boss is, in that delightfully apposite phrase, breathing down my neck.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:34 (twenty-one years ago) link

like mock cream?

gaz (gaz), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:37 (twenty-one years ago) link

exactly! or mock congress

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:38 (twenty-one years ago) link

Mock turtling, indeed.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:48 (twenty-one years ago) link

Put them in your pipe and smoke them, of course.

Scaredy cat (Natola), Monday, 14 July 2003 02:48 (twenty-one years ago) link

intending something to be satirical isn't enough to get it taken as satirical. also, if it's meant to be mock-academic, your take on your target is decades out of date.

Josh (Josh), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:00 (twenty-one years ago) link

Well, I like to think it can be taken either as satire or not. I agree with you. I intended it as a joke, but it could be taken straight. Who can say?

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:06 (twenty-one years ago) link

Don't listen to Josh Prude, they will always be naysayers who try to obstruct the course of the man or woman of true genius. Anyway, walking the line between seriousness and satire is what irony is all about. And we all know about irony and the Americans, don't we? *ducks*

As I couldn't find you a link to The Journal of Applied Uselessness, the obvious home for an article of this sort, try submitting it to a more serious academically oriented pop journal and see how you go. Here's some to get you started:

http://titles.cambridge.org/journals/journal_catalogue.asp?mnemonic=pmu

http://www.iaspm-us.net/publications/

http://www.bgsu.edu/offices/press/pp0020.html

Or do a google search on these words "journal" and "popular" or "pop".

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:11 (twenty-one years ago) link

the reader can say! if the reader has to know what you intended to take it as satire (and that knowledge alone probably isn't enough to get it to work), then there's probably something missing in the writing. like humor.

the setting of a piece can help make it satirical or not, but even then certain cues in the writing that indicate something - maybe that the piece doesn't take its style or subject matter or etc. 100% seriously - that makes it effective satire.

Josh (Josh), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:12 (twenty-one years ago) link

taken straight it's weak cuz it ain't very academic, taken not straight it's weak cuz it ain't funny

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:17 (twenty-one years ago) link

yes I'm afraid that's it.

Josh (Josh), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:18 (twenty-one years ago) link

Poppycock sir! The aim is to keep everyone confused. Anything less is not true satire.

But perhaps we can have this argument in the context of a series of peer responses in one of the august journals cited above, should Prude get published. That will help our own publication records too. I could then visit your department and you mine, and our friendly rivalry could continue for many years, until finally we fall out once and for all over the Marxist implications of a revival of 70's Canadian power rock.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:19 (twenty-one years ago) link

you're getting closer.

Josh (Josh), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:22 (twenty-one years ago) link

Thank you very much, Colin! I'll definitely check those out.

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:22 (twenty-one years ago) link

by which i mean less not satirical.

Josh (Josh), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:22 (twenty-one years ago) link

We academics have our differences, but underneath we're much the same beast. We like our wine, our conference junkets to Italy, and so on. Anyone, nmo matter how mediocre, is welcome to the fold, with one proviso: they have to believe in the awesome power of linguistic conceptualization to overcome all obstacles - even reality itself!

Good luck Prude.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:24 (twenty-one years ago) link

barrow yer full of shit

gaz (gaz), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:25 (twenty-one years ago) link

But isn't funny in the eye of the beholder, James? Humor depends on context too, so maybe if I hadn't included that "mock" in the title, thus framing it as an allegedly serious piece of scholarship, you might've quipped that it reads like satire. If the scholarliness of it isn't such a much, well, I never was that big on theory. This whole thing was a lark, anyway. Bash away!

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:26 (twenty-one years ago) link

not really - you got the language wrong (irreperable flaw no matter the intent - if you hadn't presented it as mock I still woulda thought it was weak posing, now there's just the added "bonus" - wait, that was supposed to be satire?

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:29 (twenty-one years ago) link


What if everybody is working for the weakened? Then what?

gusbot (eternal_fields), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:30 (twenty-one years ago) link

not really - you got the language wrong
Examples?

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:33 (twenty-one years ago) link

I mean a really good one you'll have no problem getting publish - there's a huge market for this stuff (e-mail sia michel or maybe chuck eddy, though you're gonna have to up the au courant quotient. better stick to michel), and the 'is this supposed to be a joke?' stance has reaped dividends for many since sontag, maybe earlier (strike 'maybe' maybe).

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:33 (twenty-one years ago) link

well, re: the language, show me a piece of 'academia takes pop culture headon! onlookers startled by puddles of blood!' wordplay that resembles the above. google "emp conference" if you need help (sterling to thread maybe).

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:35 (twenty-one years ago) link

Thank you, Gaz.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:36 (twenty-one years ago) link

there's also the 'ya can't really satirise someone who's in on the joke' obstacle also

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:36 (twenty-one years ago) link

Okay. I have some others, if you'd be at all interested in looking at them. (I could email them to you?) This is hardly my life's work, anyway. I thought it was a neat idea, and if it can get published, why not? If it stinks, eh, oh well.

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:38 (twenty-one years ago) link

Seriously Prude, submit some to some journals. It's as simple as that. Just read their submissions page, follow the format and then fire away.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:39 (twenty-one years ago) link

e-mail them to an editor!

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:41 (twenty-one years ago) link

But not to a modern intellectual pop journal like, say, Stylus, Pitchfork or The Wire. You are aiming at academics in cardigans from Oxford, I think, with the particular style you're using. Musicological types dabbling in pop and social theory. If they don't reject it, they will ask you to rewrite, they always do. And they will wonder why you haven't referred to this or that person's work (often their own work!).Just so you know. Get going!

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:47 (twenty-one years ago) link

Oh yeah, and you need to absolutely pepper your work with references to fashionable social theorists. There needs to be one social theorist at least per sentence. Where's Habermas? The longer the reference list, the better the article.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:51 (twenty-one years ago) link

But not to a modern intellectual pop journal like, say, Stylus, Pitchfork or The Wire.

:-O

jess (dubplatestyle), Monday, 14 July 2003 03:57 (twenty-one years ago) link

I can pretty much guarantee that if you email them to an editor with the preface "I wrote these as a joke, but they can also be taken seriously" that the editor in question will read half the preface and throw it in the trash, where this entire premise belongs.

M Matos (M Matos), Monday, 14 July 2003 04:15 (twenty-one years ago) link

matos i emailed you as a joke but it can also be taken seriously!!!

trife (simon_tr), Monday, 14 July 2003 04:16 (twenty-one years ago) link

im sorry i just wanted to say that plz dont reject me :`(``

trife (simon_tr), Monday, 14 July 2003 04:16 (twenty-one years ago) link

he rejects everybody trife!

James Blount (James Blount), Monday, 14 July 2003 04:19 (twenty-one years ago) link

Chuck Eddy has a whole CHAPTER revolving around this track (nearly) in Accidental History, and does a gr8 job. I mean I can find academic analysis just like this except more thoughtful in plenty of journals and a good satire of them would be fine, in the course of uh, an ilx thread or something. (this is not a good satire, but rather something rather weaker but not more absurd than an academic article).

doing something ironically vs. liking something ironically fite!

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Monday, 14 July 2003 04:54 (twenty-one years ago) link

(my take is that there's a real academic in you waiting to get out but its not v. good yet so its claiming "irony" to apologize for this -- make the real academic better go bury yrself in crit-theory and if you emerge intact then GO. if this sounds like too much work, go bludgen yr. inner academic with a frying pan)

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Monday, 14 July 2003 04:55 (twenty-one years ago) link

what it is is more like an undergraduate assignment for a paper where the student was told to 'do a marxist reading'.

by the way the best joke in it is the colon in the title, but that colon would be far funnier if the words on either side of it were funnier, because everyone already knows that this kind of article has to have a quote slash pun, then a colon, then a proper description of content. in fact academics already self-consciously take comic advantage of this convention. the ante is HIGH HIGH HIGH.

Josh (Josh), Monday, 14 July 2003 05:49 (twenty-one years ago) link

Alright, fuck off already. I get the idea.

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 05:58 (twenty-one years ago) link

I like em where they reverse the order of the title, where the pun comes last, it's like a build-up instead of a let-down.

Tracer Hand (tracerhand), Monday, 14 July 2003 06:00 (twenty-one years ago) link

I reckon you need a colon in an academic papaer. One academic once joked to a colleague of mine that they were sure to get their paper published, as it had two colons in the title.

colin s barrow (colin s barrow), Monday, 14 July 2003 06:03 (twenty-one years ago) link

Can we delete this? Thanks. Sorry.

Prude (Prude), Monday, 14 July 2003 06:14 (twenty-one years ago) link


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