― Tad (llamasfur), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 01:59 (twenty-two years ago)
― Bryan Moore (Bryan Moore), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 03:23 (twenty-two years ago)
― Emilymv (Emilymv), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 04:12 (twenty-two years ago)
Oh, and because the live performance of "Born To Run" on the 2000 tour was the best thing I've ever seen anywhere any time ever.
― Andrew Frye (paul cox), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 04:45 (twenty-two years ago)
― ham on rye (ham on rye), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 05:34 (twenty-two years ago)
similarities: both the NJ shore and the type of british seaside place Moz is singing about are shabby, blue-collar places that have seen better days. moz sings about what sounds like a nuclear holocaust striking the town; asbury park nowadays looks like it was hit by a nuclear bomb (which is why new jerseyans call it "newark/camden-by-the-sea"). both songs play with pre-conceptions folks have about shore towns and what folks do in such places, and aim to invoke memories of same in their listeners. both are almost-stereotypical distillations of their images (Bruce: earnest, passionate blue-collar guy with a thing for cars and a habit of describing cars in florid poetry. Morrissey: as one contemporary review had it re "edils," "it's the sort of vacation one imagines Morrissey having," with his own lyrical floridness). both reflect, modernize and re-situate their somewhat out-of-fashion musical obsessions in contexts in line with both their personas and contemporary music (bruce's love of spector-esque over-the-top production and duane eddy-esque twang, tarted up into a seventies pop radio treat. morrissey's love of orchestrated early-sixties british pop with shimmering late-eighties guitar). both simultaneously universal and inpenetrable to those "not in the know" already re the artists' personality cults and the geography. and neither seems too thrilled to be stuck in their respective seaside towns.
― Tad (llamasfur), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 05:55 (twenty-two years ago)
Cross reference: "Atlantic City" for that same earnest, passionate, blue collar thing. Never a big fan of Springsteen, growing up in England, however, and being familiar with the Southports, Blackpools, Rhyl's, and Skegnesses of the world, I could relate. "Born to Run" was perhaps a little too bombastic, so I preferred "Atlantic City".
― David A. (Davant), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 06:38 (twenty-two years ago)
― Tom (Groke), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 07:19 (twenty-two years ago)
― Tad (llamasfur), Tuesday, 26 August 2003 08:07 (twenty-two years ago)
"Trudging slowly over wet sandBack to the bench where your clothes were stolen"
We have all accepted this as quite normal, for about 30 years.
But ... when were the clothes stolen? On a past occasion now being recalled?
Or just now?
In which case, this is not so much dreary routine as a crisis. The character being addressed in the second person (which I take to be a general "interpellated subject position" for the listener or even the singer here, more than a specific other character) is going to be naked, or rather, just wearing swimming trunks (?), for the rest of the song (unless the rest of the song takes place temporally earlier - fairly unlikely).
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 15:06 (five years ago)
They're both love songs too.― Tom (Groke), Tuesday, August 26, 2003
Tom Ewing, a great pop critic, said this with sage authority 17 years ago, but provided no evidence for it, perhaps because it's not true.
xp I always interpreted this as the character returning from skinny dipping to find their clothes done, it’s definitely dejected, hence “trudging”. Each step is slow and drags, grey skin under grey sky with nothing to break the line, etc.
― scampus fugit (gyac), Monday, 30 November 2020 15:11 (five years ago)
they've been stolen by immigrants
― Carry On Scamping (Noodle Vague), Monday, 30 November 2020 15:24 (five years ago)
Gyac, I agree, this is plausible, but as I say - it creates a crisis for the character, doesn't it? It's not just "by 'eck, it's a grey day on this promenade, better have tea and etch a quick postcard", but "I'm in a town [perhaps far from where I live] where my clothes have been stolen and I have no one to turn to". A nightmare scenario!
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:28 (five years ago)
Noodle Vague OTM (but yes, I did always hear it as that the character's clothes are gone upon their return from swimming - it never occurred to me that this might have happened on a previous occasion). Anyway, "Born to Run" is way better, no contest, but I do often respond to stressful situations by thinking to myself "come Armageddon! Come Armageddon! Come!" xp
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:32 (five years ago)
Is the point not about this place being the sort of soulless hellhole that drags everyone down with it, so like it’s not a crisis per se, it’s just yet another heap of shit to add to the towering slagheap?
― scampus fugit (gyac), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:33 (five years ago)
"Were" is past tense though. You wouldnt get to the bench and say "oh no my clothes were stolen!"
― ledge, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:33 (five years ago)
Wait, that's exactly how I would say it. "My clothes are stolen"? Is that British usage or something?
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:34 (five years ago)
I agree with Ledge about the tense.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:38 (five years ago)
An underlying question is: does the character live in the town?
That would make the despair more relevant - if you found it awful and also couldn't easily leave.
But the song also has a certain connotation of the 'British seaside holiday', as though the character has specially *travelled to* the town. Which is certainly supported by the postcard detail.
In the former scenario, the character could at least go home for a change of clothes, assuming the thieves hadn't also taken their keys. (Why did they take clothes but not money?) In the latter, the character could conceivably do that by going back to their hotel, unless they are only here on a day trip.
I broadly agree with Gyac about overall implication, but I don't think that losing your clothes would be easy to cope with.
If I wrote a song in which, in the first line, the character's clothes were stolen, presumably leaving them half-naked, then I wouldn't leave the implications of that unaddressed for the whole rest of the song.
"My clothes have been stolen!" - ok "oi some fucker's gone and nicked my clothes" obv.xp to sund4r.
― ledge, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:39 (five years ago)
Oh, that's interesting. I think most North Americans would say "my clothes were stolen" in that situation. "My clothes have been stolen" might be something I would write (especially if I were writing a 19th century period piece) but not say.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:42 (five years ago)
One could go with the Ledge reading and say: this is a resort the character visits again and again, and the beach comes with a memory of their clothes once having been stolen there.
BTW the video of this song, an absolute classic of post-Smiths aesthetics, depicts a vegetarian teenage girl living, frustratedly, in a seaside town (not, for instance, a young man visiting one).
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:42 (five years ago)
"stolen" fits with the tense the narrator's using. Jokes about his politics aside I think we can say that Moz was never so carefully precise that he'd consider the wider implications of the scene, it's surely just a bleak joke about the kind of place the song describes. Have never thought that the character described is definitely visiting the place, tehy might well live there.
― Carry On Scamping (Noodle Vague), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:44 (five years ago)
The postcard writer has to be visiting but the narrator could be a local telling them they don't belong there.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:46 (five years ago)
There are some specific towns near me that this song effortlessly evokes btw
― Carry On Scamping (Noodle Vague), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:47 (five years ago)
could be a local resident doing some ironic postcard writing. I also wonder about the cheap tray.
― ledge, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:49 (five years ago)
"the clothes were stolen" = the singer himself stole the clothes earlier and wore them to the beach
when he returns to the beach -- such is the glum aspect of this benighted place -- there they are. yet they remain "stolen", his only in a sense he feels glumly unable to claim
― mark s, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:50 (five years ago)
doubly glum
― mark s, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:51 (five years ago)
When I lived in a miserable English seaside town I'd write postcards to friends who'd managed to move away, the lucky dogs. In so far as I ever thought about this lyric, that was what I thought was going on.
― Tim, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:53 (five years ago)
In fact reading back its important I think to remember that Morrissey is very rarely observing anything as a writer beyond other texts: movies,TV, Betjeman in this cas. His details are rarely sharp or precise
"win yourself a cheap tray? I dunno, seaside stalls have tat for prizes sometimes
― Carry On Scamping (Noodle Vague), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:54 (five years ago)
But does he use the subjunctive mood when writing the postcard?
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:54 (five years ago)
I think it's worth noting that Springsteen played "Everyday is Like Sunday" on his radio show over the summer, I assume largely as a literal-minded joke.
― Josh in Chicago, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:56 (five years ago)
I'm guessing he played the recording but I'm sort of hoping "played" means he covered it.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:57 (five years ago)
in his stolen clothes
― mark s, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:58 (five years ago)
"the clothes were stolen" = the singer himself stole the clothes earlier and wore them to the beachwhen he returns to the beach -- such is the glum aspect of this benighted place -- there they are. yet they remain "stolen", his only in a sense he feels glumly unable to claim― mark s, Monday, November 30, 2020
― mark s, Monday, November 30, 2020
The perversity, along with the eloquence, of this is tremendous and inspiring.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 16:59 (five years ago)
Also OTM
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 16:59 (five years ago)
Tim, I have often written postcards to people from home. I agree it's highly possible. There is no Internet in this song after all. It's before even the days of Sarah Records posting fanzines and notes to people. It's very much a postal era vision.
Still, taking it on balance, postcards to most people still do convey 'wish you were here' from a holiday destination, which tends to make me think that is the idea here, rather than Tim's quite plausible idea.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:01 (five years ago)
sund4r, I do think that "How I dearly wish I was not here" is what he (or even she) actually writes on the postcard.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:02 (five years ago)
I've never known, still don't know, what "greased tea" is.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:03 (five years ago)
It would be quite Morrisseyesque to write a song complaining about somewhere you didn't have to be, I guess.
― Carry On Scamping (Noodle Vague), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:03 (five years ago)
TIL that British people write (or wrote) postcards from their places of residence. It sounds like a lovely custom.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:06 (five years ago)
"Greased tea" = cheap diner tea made in a cup that was so poorly rinsed that it still feels a bit oily, I thought.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:07 (five years ago)
That's a good answer, Sund4r, to an otherwise difficult question.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:09 (five years ago)
― scampus fugit (gyac), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:22 (five years ago)
― scampus fugit (gyac), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:26 (five years ago)
I just assumed, given it's Morrissey, he meant "tea made for you by an Italian"
― DJP, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:35 (five years ago)
While we're talking grammar, can I note that "through" always bothered me a little in "at night, we ride through mansions of glory on suicide machines"?: to my ears, that sounds like he's crashing through the walls of the mansions on his bike. My logical mind always wants it to be something like "near" or "among" or "'round", although "through" probably rolls off the tongue best.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:38 (five years ago)
"Ride past" would work too. I do really love those opening lines otherwise!
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:40 (five years ago)
xpost
There's definitely something odd about either the tense or the POV in that first line. It seems to imply some foreknowledge that your clothes have been stolen; even as you're trudging back to the bench, you're identifying it in your mind as "the bench where your clothes were stolen."
― Lily Dale, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:43 (five years ago)
Yeah, I think my brain sometimes replaces "through" with "to," although I actually like "through." There's something dreamlike about it, suggestive of castles in the air - like, mansions you can ride through are by definition not real.
― Lily Dale, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:47 (five years ago)
Lily Dale: re bench, yes, I quite agree, hence my sense that it's referring to a past occasion, during multiple visits to this resort.
I agree with you about the Boss lyric also, it works as fantastical.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:49 (five years ago)
Ah, interesting. I thought the point was that the mansions are oppressively real but maybe their very unattainability makes them seem a bit surreal and dreamlike.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 17:51 (five years ago)
I took it that the "streets of a runaway American dream" are the oppressive workday reality; the night transforms them briefly into mansions of glory.
― Lily Dale, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:57 (five years ago)
xpost to the pinefox: It's odd, though - the bench line - because most people would throw in a "once" or something to time-stamp it. Cf John Prine: "In a laundromat not too far from the Alamo/ Sits the girl who stole my records very long ago." The absence of a time marker gives it the impression of existing in two time-frames at once.
― Lily Dale, Monday, 30 November 2020 17:58 (five years ago)
Oh, I see. I thought he was contrasting his workaday reality with the luxurious lives of the people who employ him to sweat it out on the streets but I acknowledge that it might not be socialist realism.
― actually-very-convincing (Sund4r), Monday, 30 November 2020 18:00 (five years ago)
xp
Yeah, I guess it depends on whether you see it as literal, in the "Mansion on the Hill" sense of riding around past houses they can't afford, or drawing on religious symbolism - "in my Father's house are many mansions" - to create a sense of infinite richness and possibility at night that does not exist during the day.
― Lily Dale, Monday, 30 November 2020 18:04 (five years ago)
I think the latter. Mansions of glory as a transfiguration of the real. That's a good reading.
― the pinefox, Monday, 30 November 2020 18:32 (five years ago)