Looking for edited music reviews...

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I'm a high-school English teacher and some of my students are interested in writing music reviews as part of their writing project. I used to write music reviews, so I'm helping a bit with the writing part. But I also want to show them the editing process; examples of reviews/articles before and after editing, with all of the red marks and questions included. I want to do this partly because I want them to feel okay about being edited or guided, but also so they can start to see for themselves what the writing process involves. Does anyone know a good place to find these? Or have any they'd like to share? Thanks!

― Alan Hanson, Thursday, 15 September 2005 03:34 (twenty-one years ago)

i'd be willing to share a bunch of befores and afters, but they're all in digital format, without the red marks.

― ken taylrr has gone off the internet because of you (ken taylrr), Thursday, 15 September 2005 03:39 (twenty-one years ago)

TRACK CHANGES

― hstencil (hstencil), Thursday, 15 September 2005 03:42 (twenty-one years ago)

um, my editors don't usually send me their tracked changes. i just see em how they go in, and then how they come out. but anyone who's willing to track my changes on my stories can have at em!

― ken taylrr has gone off the internet because of you (ken taylrr), Thursday, 15 September 2005 03:48 (twenty-one years ago)

Before/After, redmarked, whatever...Anything would be helpful! I really apprecaite it. You can send examples (or thoughts/ideas) to me at alan38hanson[at]hotmail.com. Thanks.

― Alan Hanson, Thursday, 15 September 2005 03:48 (twenty-one years ago)

i will. no probs

― ken taylrr has gone off the internet because of you (ken taylrr), Thursday, 15 September 2005 03:50 (twenty-one years ago)

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