What is wrong with this song?

http://pouchjams.tumblr.com/post/292277096/pouched-sneakers-this-song-contains-samples-of

everything

it exists

• The way the drums in the intro stop for the arpeggio
• Every fourth measure of the arpeggio
• The vocals
• The lyrics
• The way the samples and synth don't work together at all
• The mostly ineffective use of the "Eye Know" intro

And if this is your track, know that the above is meant as objective criticism and should not be taken as a diss. Also, you might want to check out the "I Make Music" board if you're looking to workshop.