a humble request for criticism (on criticism)

hi. i want this to be just a wee lil' thread - i am working on one my first pieces of film criticism for a "real" publication right now (for that doc "the corporation,") and was wondering if any of you smarty-pantz could read it and tell me what ya think. even if u haven't seen the film.. i'm kind of excessively self-conscious as it's my Very First Time reviewing etc, and am only used to academic/collegiate writing when it comes to cinema (and don't want this to sound too belabored, etc). so um, just post anything here - even a simple "hi" - and i'll email you (or u can email me), i really-really look forward to any comments, suggestions or advice you guyz might have on it - just didnt want to post it here and well, i have too much self-loathing to ever erect a blog... i admire a lot of people on here though, so i hope someone will respond! thx!