I couldn't help wanting to read a sample of The Cartographer's after your post, and it definitely has a touch of the Lanchester about it
― Chuck_Tatum, Tuesday, 3 May 2022 15:37 (two years ago) link
yaaaaaay i love this book! i teach it every year and this year my students did not love it, so i am extra-glad you did. it rules.
― horseshoe, Monday, May 2, 2022 2:40 PM (yesterday) bookmarkflaglink
i picked it up in no small part because of your touting it in these threads, so thank you.
― the cat needs to start paying for its own cbd (map), Tuesday, 3 May 2022 17:21 (two years ago) link
paul takes the form of a mortal girl by andrea lawlor
have any of y'all read this? it's a fucking delight. highly recommended if you've ever been gay in college
― flamenco drop (BradNelson), Wednesday, 4 May 2022 15:09 (two years ago) link
Finished Morselli’s Dissipatio HG. Glad to have read it, tho somewhat unsatisfied with it— I felt like the lushness of the narrator’s interior landscape was occasionally cracked by his reverence and love for the natural world, but the descriptions of the latter felt piddling in spite of his abstracted, almost anarcho-primitivist reactionary belief system.One thing that was interesting for me was that the style of interior monologue reminded me a bit of Christa Wolf’s work, particularly in Accident and No Place on Earth.Not sure what’s next, have a few different options, but might go with another novel— not sure why I’m feeling novels this spring, but I am.
― we need outrage! we need dicks!! (the table is the table), Wednesday, 4 May 2022 16:46 (two years ago) link
One thing I remark about Asimov's FOUNDATION & EMPIRE: I hazarded, on no evidence, that future work might just contain some women characters, and indeed this one does - a woman called Bayta, who has a degree of strength and independence* though is still sometimes referred to as focusing on 'fripperies' like serving dinner while a war's on.
*these may sound like poor criteria for judging women characters but I remind the reader that vol 1 only contained one woman character, a surly wife, who appeared twice in 230pp.
Leaving aside the above point, I'm not sure I'm enjoying this volume as much as the first, because of the way the plot has turned halfway through towards yet another war, this time with a seemingly indestructible foe. But 50pp to go.
― the pinefox, Wednesday, 4 May 2022 19:03 (two years ago) link
Will Sergeant Bunnyman Just read the first couple of chapters so he's still a young child i think. He's gone to school and things but not got much further than that. I just listened to his appearance on Curious Creatures the podcast done by Lol Tolhurst and Budgie which seems to be a good one.
The music of Africa J. H. Kwabena Nketia,not really started this yet but got it from the library yesterday. 1974 book on African music and its history. Should be good, I think i had it recommended or at least cited by Paul Gilroy.
Soldaten Sonke Neitzeld and harald WelzerJust been reading some tales told by captured Luftwaffe pilots about how they enjoyed shooting bullets at people . & targeting ships and things. The writers/editors have compared their descriptions as analogous to video game players. With a similar level of dismissal of collateral damage, like it has no effect on them and is actually something they enjoy doing. I think this book probably gets a lot more scary, examples given in the introduction would certainly suggest so.
― Stevolende, Wednesday, 4 May 2022 19:39 (two years ago) link
I finished FOUNDATION & EMPIRE. I don't like the turn that this book takes c. halfway through, and don't feel greatly encouraged about reading Vol 3, but have started that already and will get through it.
Part of my reason for dislike is something that will sound deeply old-fashioned or unsophisticated, at best, to most. That is, I felt that this SF novel veered off track through factors that weren't really 'SF' or 'scientific' enough. A 'mutant' takes over the galaxy due to his unique powers of mind control. But there is no explanation of who 'mutants' are, why they arise, or why this particular mental capacity would emerge (in just one being in the galaxy?). We're in superhero territory at best. The effect is somewhat like 'magic', and thus, to me, a somewhat unhappy blend of 'SF' and 'fantasy'.
This view, I again realise, will not be respected by many readers, including SF experts, but it is part of my intuitive response to this book. I think this response is actually analogous to the old Detection Club rule that mysteries should never have supernatural solutions. This demonstrates the tendency of SF and detection to share 'cognitive' (Suvin) bases, though in reality I am aware that large amounts of SF do not, and most of the science in SF is, almost by definition, speculative or imaginary.
One more notable feature: after all my complaints about the extreme lack of women in these books, the one I mentioned, Bayta, actually turned out to be a heroine who was the strongest, most independent figure and took the final decisive action. A considerable turnaround by Asimov's standards.
― the pinefox, Friday, 6 May 2022 09:10 (two years ago) link
Pinefox, I'm slightly surprised you haven't really said anything about Asimov's actual prose style ...
― Ward Fowler, Friday, 6 May 2022 09:12 (two years ago) link
so bad it's not even prose iirc
― mark s, Friday, 6 May 2022 09:57 (two years ago) link
Heh. Lots of dull exposition and drab dialogue punctured by plenty of sf-style minced oaths iirc. I believe Martin had something to say about this on more than one occasion.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 10:12 (two years ago) link
Think I meant to say punctuated by but punctured kind of works too I guess.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 10:14 (two years ago) link
Destroy Asimov (worst prose in SF, which is going some), Doc Smith (unless you are under 14).
― Martin Skidmore, Thursday, 16 May 2002 00:00 (nineteen years ago) link
― mark s, Friday, 6 May 2022 10:19 (two years ago) link
You don’t need to read this whole thing, since I excepted this best part for you.https://scifi.stackexchange.com/questions/244773/why-does-the-protagonist-of-asimovs-caves-of-steel-exclaim-jehoshaphat-inste
You might wish to note that this is a technique frequently used by Asimov. Specific examples include;The Foundation Trilogy:- "Space!", "By Space!" "Great Space!", "Good Galaxy!", "By the Galaxy!", "He went space knows where" in place of "God"End of Eternity: "Time!" or "By Time!" in place of "God"Reason (Robot Short Story) - "“Oh, Jupiter, a robot Descartes." in place of "Jesus",etc
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 10:30 (two years ago) link
The 'Galaxy!' stuff doesn't work well for me, but I love the way that the two astronauts in I, ROBOT say 'Sizzling Saturn !!'.
A character in FOUNDATION & EMPIRE repeatedly uses the word 'unprintable' in place of an expletive.
I would say that the FOUNDATION books are workmanlike as narrative, sometimes clumsy or awkward, very occasionally and tenuously reaching for something more lyrical (about space). But I, ROBOT is better: clear, crisp, functional, rational, getting complex ethical dilemmas and the like across.
― the pinefox, Friday, 6 May 2022 11:35 (two years ago) link
Also true that in FOUNDATION there is much bad expository dialogue ie: a character summarises something and the other character says "This is well understood. What of it? Go on!"
― the pinefox, Friday, 6 May 2022 11:36 (two years ago) link
im also going to start saying that
― mark s, Friday, 6 May 2022 11:44 (two years ago) link
great space! this is well understood. what of it? go on!
almost like it's well understood but go on king I guess
― Daniel_Rf, Friday, 6 May 2022 11:52 (two years ago) link
By Hammer Time!
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 12:06 (two years ago) link
By Space Ghost!
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 12:11 (two years ago) link
By Spacely’s Sprocket!
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 12:16 (two years ago) link
The effect is somewhat like 'magic'
any sufficiently advanced technology etc etc, which iirc was pointed out in the first book
i agree that the mule’s advent doesn’t bear too much scrutiny, but of course the story is much less about him than how The Plan will respond to him. (that doesn’t bear much scrutiny either tbh, but disbelief has to be suspended somewhere)
― mookieproof, Friday, 6 May 2022 12:59 (two years ago) link
Thought that saying was attributed to ACC, iirc.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 13:35 (two years ago) link
Anyone read Hurricane Season, by Fernanda Melchor? Just picked it up for my wife and I'm wondering if it's too bleak for her
― Heez, Friday, 6 May 2022 14:08 (two years ago) link
xp it is
― mookieproof, Friday, 6 May 2022 14:09 (two years ago) link
Prose Stylist
Some famous terrible prose writers: Isaac Asimov is unspeakably bad, tin-eared and clumsy and ugly. I love Dick (haha yes okay), but he's sometimes bad. Sinclair Lewis was stiff and dull, but not as rotten as Dreiser. Barbara Cartland is much worse than you even imagine she would be.― Martin Skidmore (Martin Skidmore), Sunday, 8 September 2002 20:36 (nineteen years ago)
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 14:18 (two years ago) link
Whole posts is worth reading though, since he also says who he thinks is good.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 14:19 (two years ago) link
postsAny discussion of Bad Writing increases the already high incidence of typos for some unknownobvious reason.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 14:24 (two years ago) link
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MzlK0OGpIRs
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 14:26 (two years ago) link
No prob w Dreiser's prose in the Library of America omnibus of Sister Carrie, Jennie Gerhardt, and 12 Men. Haven't read any more of him, and maybe I hit it lucky/am too permissive. No problem with PKD either, though I've read a lot more of his.
― dow, Friday, 6 May 2022 17:39 (two years ago) link
Think I pretty much enjoyed the trilogy when I was 10, incl. not feeling in awe of/intimidated by the grown-up's prose. Pretty sure he was trying to please my demographic (I was mostly reading comics at the time), and all that "By the Galaxy!"" was part of it, even though I could read "son of a bitch!" and "Tell him to get his ass down here" in Galaxy magazine, in gen. audience contexts usually not too hard for 10-year-old mind to grok.
― dow, Friday, 6 May 2022 17:45 (two years ago) link
The Golden Age of By Galaxy Time is ten.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Friday, 6 May 2022 19:15 (two years ago) link
pinefox: i was happy to read your thoughts on the foundation series -- i'm still a great fan of the original three books, despite their flaws. i don't mind the clunky dialogue (someone on ilx once suggested that all the characters talked a little bit like mr burns), and i honestly don't remember the descriptive writing being too bad (plain and non-flashy, certainly).
iirc, asimov wrote the later novels at his publisher's urging, and i struggle to remember much about them. he seems to have lost interest in fiction in the mid-50s and spent most of the rest of his career writing, well, every other type of book: limerick collections, autobiographies (at least three of these), an annotated gilbert and sullivan. if halley's comet was due to return, you could bet there would be a book out that year called "ASIMOV'S GUIDE TO HALLEY'S COMET." (that very book has been at the used bookstore down the street for years, but i've resisted the urge to buy it so far.) apparently one of his goals was to get at least one book in every category of the dewey decimal system.
― (The Other) J.D. (J.D.), Friday, 6 May 2022 19:29 (two years ago) link
― we need outrage! we need dicks!! (the table is the table), Friday, 6 May 2022 22:38 (two years ago) link
I finished Prisoners of Geography, which had a few good points about it, but the less said about it the better.
I am now reading a pop history of the US Dust Bowl in the 1930s, The Worst Hard Times, Timothy Egan. As popular history it is exemplary. Egan finds and tells the stories of individuals, families and various small towns which lends human scale and emotional resonance to the history he wants to convey, then surrounds these small scale stories with the larger context of US homesteading, WWI, frontier capitalism, the mechanization of farming, and patterns of immigration. He also writes very 'punchy' prose without getting too gaudy to be readable. It works the way it is designed to work and delivers a large amount of information in a painless, engaging fashion.
― more difficult than I look (Aimless), Saturday, 7 May 2022 03:55 (two years ago) link
this list he posts of good stylists is senior year of high school type stuff, not terribly interesting imho. also all men .
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Saturday, 7 May 2022 11:16 (two years ago) link
I don’t object to authors being problematic, I just object to a list of dead white dudes who are part of an English language canon (and have been for 50+ years in some cases) being construed as interesting when it comes to style. I agree with his choices, but just don’t think they’re very interesting ones! Not trying to pick on you, I am just a little confused by what you wrote.
― we need outrage! we need dicks!! (the table is the table), Saturday, 7 May 2022 12:21 (two years ago) link
tbh I really only care that the dead white dude, whose taste in sf was always interesting to me, posted about M. John Harrison, who is still around and still a dude but maybe can still write too. But yeah, looking at the list again, your point is fair enough.
― Johnny Thunderwords (James Redd and the Blecchs), Saturday, 7 May 2022 12:32 (two years ago) link
― gop on ya gingrich (wins), Saturday, 7 May 2022 14:42 (two years ago) link
_I don’t object to authors being problematic, I just object to a list of dead white dudes who are part of an English language canon (and have been for 50+ years in some cases) being construed as interesting when it comes to style. I agree with his choices, but just don’t think they’re very interesting ones! Not trying to pick on you, I am just a little confused by what you wrote._tbf this post from twenty years ago is more about addressing the topic of that thread than it is about coming up with an “interesting” list of names of authors
― we need outrage! we need dicks!! (the table is the table), Saturday, 7 May 2022 16:17 (two years ago) link
The post, not the list, was construed as “worth reading” because it mentioned good prose as well as bad Citing Wodehouse as an example of good prose is no more interesting than citing Asimov as an example of bad, I agree, I just think you’ve focused on the wrong part unless you are just heavily invested in the interestingness of citations of authors
― gop on ya gingrich (wins), Saturday, 7 May 2022 16:44 (two years ago) link
I finished Jenny Erpenbeck's 'Go, Went, Gone'. Really, depressingly good on the refugee situation in Europe, and as I said above good at making one feel guilty for one's comfortable life. Hugely and rightfully scornful of the enormous abrogation of responsibility that is the Dublin regulation. Very simple prose that occasionally startles you with an image e.g. 'For a moment, this thought opens its jaws wide, displaying its frightening teeth'.
Now started Lethem's 'Gun, with Occasional Music'. I wasn't expected such a brazen Chandler pastiche, will see if it overstays its welcome - it's fairly short at least.
― buffalo tomozzarella (ledge), Saturday, 7 May 2022 19:37 (two years ago) link
It's still as good as almost any book he's written.
― the pinefox, Sunday, 8 May 2022 14:51 (two years ago) link
Finsihed Will Sargent's Bunnyman which has me hoping he gets the 2nd volume finished soon. He stops just after De Freitas has been recruited though not sure how taht works if he was still aschoolfriend of a friend in a Somerset boarding school. Though since everybody else is like 19 or 20 maybe this wasa couple of years after taht anyway.Really enjoyed this. So do definitely want more. I caught teh City Lights webinar book launch thing of this and Bobby Gillespie's memoir and wonder if that is remotely worth a look. Like only reading about 15 books already.
Think I will have the combined bio of Ornette Coleman, Cecil Taylor and Miles Davis by the end of this week. Have already read a lot about Miles and far less about the other 2.
― Stevolende, Sunday, 8 May 2022 16:34 (two years ago) link
A combined bio of those three? What book is that?
― dow, Sunday, 8 May 2022 17:42 (two years ago) link
Miles, Ornette, Cecil : how Miles Davis, Ornette Coleman, and Cecil Taylor revolutionized the world of jazz / Howard Mandel.ISBN:9780415967143 ((hbk.)(hbk.) :)0415967147 ((hbk.) :)
― Stevolende, Sunday, 8 May 2022 19:45 (two years ago) link
Forgot about that book.
― Don't Renege On (Our Dub) (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 8 May 2022 19:48 (two years ago) link
Holy shit that Mandel book costs a fortune! Was hoping I could find a cheap copy somehow.
― we need outrage! we need dicks!! (the table is the table), Sunday, 8 May 2022 20:15 (two years ago) link
Can you really accept this guy as an authority on jazz?
https://e.snmc.io/i/600/s/12938adddf5d9510964c642ea31bece4/2115107/howie-mandel-fits-like-a-glove-Cover-Art.jpg
― Les hommes de bonbons (cryptosicko), Sunday, 8 May 2022 20:30 (two years ago) link
Lol. wrong thread maybe.
― Don't Renege On (Our Dub) (James Redd and the Blecchs), Sunday, 8 May 2022 20:37 (two years ago) link