sorry to be a jerk, but I don't like either of the examples so far! "unspooling clouds of rubbersmoke" is like some half-assed Joyce-biting, which I would probably be okay with except that I just don't like McCarthy (must be the name); and I'm not really sure what to make of the other one.
― INSUFFICIENT FUN (bernard snowy), Wednesday, 26 May 2010 15:02 (fifteen years ago)