Should music writing have a knowledge of musicality? Is ILM representative of music fandom in general?

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Dan and Nitsuh raise this point (which is one we've discussed before, obviously) on the Ponderous word-choice in Pitchfork's review of the new Boards of Canada thread, and I think it deserves a fresh discussion of its own.

I have next to zero technical knowledge of music; I know not of notes, chords, times, tempos or timbres, and my writing surfes (by the skin of its mixed metaphor) very much on emotional reactions, pop.cult. context, and impressionistic descriptions of what things sound like on a very basic level. This is, I think, because I'm very much a fan rather than a musician (I don't play a note and never have had the desire to), and I write the kind of thing that I would want to read - I don't consider myself a "music writer", but rather someone who happens to write about music (by accident, practically).

Judging by the feedback I get via email and comments, my approach strikes a chord (dyswidt?) with some people, but obviously it's massively flawed if the reader knows anything about the nuts and bolts of music itself and wants writing that addresses that knowledge. But very few writers outside of specialist publications do seem to address that knowledge. I simply wouldn't be able to write like Nitsuh or in a fashion that satisfies what Dan sometimes wants froma review or article, not without completely re-educating myself from the bottom-up. But is that necessarily a bad thing?

The second thing, I think spins off the first. ILM is a weird case - it's very easy to see ILM as a microcosm of music fandom but it isn't; the way people listen to and discuss music in here is vastly, massively different to anywhere else that I've encountered music fans, be it down the pub, in a seminar at university, or online. There are demands and assumptions which occur here and are taken as standard which very few other people subscribe to, or even know exist.

I've been distracted while writing this post and can't remember where I was heading, so I'll just leave it to the rest of you to figure it out.

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 08:27 (nineteen years ago)

The consensus when this topic comes up seems to be "Yes, more of this knowledge stuff would be good in music writing" but most people either don't have it or don't know how to integrate it into the kind of writing they want to do. So it becomes something for someone else to do.

When I write I think the best I can do is to come up with ideas about how I think the song works while being unable to trace back to why, musicologically speaking, it works that way. I think the 'how' is very interesting, though. But then I would.

ILM is not in any way representative of music fandom in general. I'm not sure where that bit's heading either!

Tom (Groke), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 08:35 (nineteen years ago)

i was talking about this with a film academic -- with movie writing, you are expected to know a bit about how things are done. editing, lighting, concepts like 'arc'. i think lay viewers pick up on some of these things too. but lay listeners don't know much about how music is made -- in fact, lots of music makers don't, and hardly any music writers i like do.

to be honest i find formalist criticism of movies *and* of music a bit boring, and also quasi-scientific. last night i was reading about a film from 1929 which was part silent, part sound (sound in only two scenes). the writer had only seen the film as a silent print, and it wasn't a good print, and yet he was making all kinds of wild post-structuralist hay out of details you'd only see if you ran the thing back and forth, as you surely wouldn't have done in the odeon of 1929.

Enrique (Enrique), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 08:44 (nineteen years ago)

The filmmakers who I know are often very scathing of film academics, Enrique, because they don't appreciate the actual practicalities of maiking films.

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 08:53 (nineteen years ago)

yeah, a lot of them don't (same goes for film journalists), but the ones who do know more about filmmaking than most music writers know about music making.

Enrique (Enrique), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 08:55 (nineteen years ago)

Hmm,

Do you need a knowledge of musicality to be able to 'critique' Babyshambles, for example, when most of their basis for existing is based on their image/lyrics/personality?

mark grout (mark grout), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 08:57 (nineteen years ago)

although, there are kind of two types of knowledge going on. film hackademics (yeah, cheers) kind of 'conceptualize' the actual concrete process of say editing (ie sticking strips of celluloid [well, not any more obv] together) into something more, erm... conceptual: an actual film editor doesn't have to get deeply involved in writing or storyboarding, but in these conceptual terms, writing and editing are part of the 'editing' process, if you get me.

xpost

Enrique (Enrique), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 09:00 (nineteen years ago)

There's a fair bit of technical stuff on CoM. If you want to know how a musician managed to achieve this emotional gear change via that chord/structural change it's useful to have a working knowledge of the mechanics. But I am always careful not to let the technical stuff overwhelm the more important emotional content. The former is the process, the latter the intention.

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 09:07 (nineteen years ago)

ILM generally seems pretty good on (amongst other things) musicality, intention, comparison, context and factual accuracy. Where I think it falls down: communalism/collectivism, unadorned sentimentality, and superficiality/image/sexiness/fun. It gets too cloistered, too hung up on the requirement to be conceptually complex/different, and too focused on purely individual responses to populist genres (headphones vs. gigs/dancefloors). Hence all the furrowing of brows, scratching of heads (and conspiracy theories) when a collectivist, image-heavy act like Franz Ferdinand achieves major success. If popular music is intended to stimulate mind, body and soul, then ILM is very much geared towards the "mind" part of the equation. Which I guess goes with the territory, or else we'd all be going "facking MEGA!", or "boo-hoo that's so BEAUTIFUL!", or "CHOON!" - which would make for dull reading.

mike t-diva (mike t-diva), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 09:53 (nineteen years ago)

in other words, "different people on ilx have different opinions" shock horror youth cult probe.

franz ferdinand are a worthless pile of offal and it is convenient in several corners of the industry for them to be commercially successful, although given that their new album has already fallen to number five in its second week of release, we will hopefully be seeing the back of those chancers soon.

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 10:17 (nineteen years ago)

Yeah, but I so would. (Apart from the one who looks like a supply teacher, of course.)

This changes everything.

mike t-diva (mike t-diva), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 10:41 (nineteen years ago)

You sure you're not mixing up the one who looks like a supply teacher with Michael "Love Changes Everything" Ball?

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 10:42 (nineteen years ago)

Generally, I really a bit of music theory and technical discussion thrown into a review - just like I love it when Dan applies his evident expertise in vocal technique, and the appropriate terminology, to the likes of Maroon 5 on this board; That said, I'm not sure I'd want every review to dissolve into a discussion of counterpoint/scales/meters; perhaps the reason I like this stuff is its relative scarcity. Oftentimes, a paragraph like this is about the only section of a review where you can see the reviewer standing on something resembling solid ground, with something resembling objective authority. It's a nice respite from the general barrage of stylized opinion.

joseph cotten (joseph cotten), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 11:27 (nineteen years ago)

I mean I never a bit a music theory. Throw a "like" in there.

joseph cotten (joseph cotten), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 11:27 (nineteen years ago)

I feel compelled to point out that I recognize that a full-on technical analysis of a piece of music does not really satisfy the requirements of a music review. I also feel compelled to point out that I don't know nearly as much about singing as I should given the opportunities I've had but that's totally tangential to the topic at hand.

I'm kind of tired so I don't have any real coherent thoughts right now. I'll try again this afternoon and after some other people have chimed in.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:10 (nineteen years ago)

actually, it seems like every kind of art criticsm (other than pop/rock music) is expected to provide some kind of knowledge of the technical aspects of their subjects. I do wish pop music crit did the same, and not because I want to read disertations on music theory, but because it's another element of the music that bears meaning

Dominique (dleone), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:16 (nineteen years ago)

THANK YOU DOM that's what I wanted to say.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:19 (nineteen years ago)

Who does it bear meaning to though? Does it only bear meaning to people with a degree of technical knowledge in the first place?

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:23 (nineteen years ago)

Like I said in the first post, everybody agrees it's a good thing every time the topic comes up, nobody then does anything about it. Now we have lots of music press editors reading ILM, perhaps they will take this thread as evidence of a groundswell of opinion in favour of a more technical music criticism. But I doubt it.

The interesting, unspoken part of Dominique's statement is the question - OK, why did pop music criticism become like this? How come its practitioners ended up with these different sets of expectations and requirements?

Tom (Groke), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:25 (nineteen years ago)

My knee-jerk initial response is "because people think pop music and the people who listen to it are DUMM". I can't think of a counter-reason.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:28 (nineteen years ago)

It's interesting that roughly around the time when pop music criticism degenerated (okay, evolved) into something proudly subjective, art criticism began hysterically faking objectivity by biting (and misappropriating) a bunch of academic terms from philosophy and anthropology,

joseph cotten (joseph cotten), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:32 (nineteen years ago)

That might well be all there is to it Dan!

I'm sort of intrigued by the way film crit keeps getting cited here, because the film crit in say newspapers, and even in mass-market film mags like Empire, doesn't make a great virtue of technical knowledge. Are all those critics people who HAVE that knowledge but know not to express it for uninterested readers?

Tom (Groke), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:33 (nineteen years ago)

to Nick - hmm, I suppose it bears meaning in similar ways as lyrical content does: imagine what might be gained from trying understand why an artist uses particular kinds of chord progressions; why does a genre seem to prefer these or those kinds of melodies? do people from Spain seem to return to particular harmonies, and if so, why? do new Spanish artists differ from old ones in terms of harmony, and what could have caused this? Why does Andy Partridge seem to use a lot of passing tones in his melodies in a similar way as Bach? Could it mean that he's a high formalist? How does high formalism fit in a world that seems mostly regarded as pluralist and post modernist? Does that make him quaint and stubborn, despite the fact that his harmonies are, technically speaking, more "complex" than those of a lot of newer bands? Does his use of particular chord progressions as he is singing about raping mules say anything unusual about the song?

yes, you would end up learning a lot about theory in this process, but ideally, you'd learn more about "music", "art" and how they relate in real, relevant ways to the rest of the world

Dominique (dleone), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:33 (nineteen years ago)

I always remember the dense English music critic who praised the "Aeolian cadences' in the Beatles' "It Won't Be Long."

A critic should always bear in mind the form-vs-content dialectic. To apply so much structuralist erudition to, say, "Since U Been Gone" or a Michael Curtiz film makes you look real silly.

Sometimes it's useful. Last week, Dan and I had a lively debate on the Killers vs Maroon 5 about head vs chest voices.

Then again, I'm constantly making exceptions. Good writing is the ideal balm.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:38 (nineteen years ago)

Why does Andy Partridge seem to use a lot of passing tones in his melodies in a similar way as Bach?

This strikes me as an unnecessary question.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:39 (nineteen years ago)

That strikes me as a very necessary question!

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:41 (nineteen years ago)

How does one define real and relevent? How much does the average record buyer and review reader know or care about high formalism?

I am also vaguelly suspicious of the idea that if one knows a great deal about music technique then one can end up admiring stuff rather than liking it (or liking it because you admire it) - I had a friend at university like this, and listening and talking about music with him was a nightmare because anything I liked he would decry because it wasn't formally complex enough, no matter what reasons I gave for liking things.

Double-X - both explain why please!

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:42 (nineteen years ago)

well, if I was going to the "Andy Partridge is a stubborn high formalist who, at least musically, seems stuck in the past" place, it's one of the ways I might get there

Dominique (dleone), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:43 (nineteen years ago)

To create an analogy you must compare like with like. Bach and Andy Partridge, passing tones notwithstanding, don't have anything in common formally! It's like comparing a graphic novel to Anna Karenina.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:44 (nineteen years ago)

I'm wondering how much technical knowledge the artists themselves have, and whether that plays into this. If you're talking hip-hop or electronic music, intimate knowledge of gear and a good ear seems more valued than anything to do with music theory.

Mark (MarkR), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:45 (nineteen years ago)

Why is that so bad, Alfred?

X-post - Mark OTM.

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:45 (nineteen years ago)

I'm sort of intrigued by the way film crit keeps getting cited here, because the film crit in say newspapers, and even in mass-market film mags like Empire, doesn't make a great virtue of technical knowledge. Are all those critics people who HAVE that knowledge but know not to express it for uninterested readers?

magazine reviewers are quite different from newspaper reviewers, and i think they tend to know more about filmmaking, or aspects thereof. often broadsheet reviewers are failed men of letters who are there to crack wise. not all of them, though -- and also 'technique' in film runs to some things they do understand: drama, acting, script, those things, if not more specifically 'filmy' stuff like sfx. so you get much more film crit about acting than you do music crit about singing. maybe.

A critic should always bear in mind the form-vs-content dialectic. To apply so much structuralist erudition to, say, "Since U Been Gone" or a Michael Curtiz film makes you look real silly.

i'm baffled by this, from start to finish.

N_RQ, Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:46 (nineteen years ago)

It just struck me that the answer to Tom's question about WHY music writing got like this is screamingly fucking obvious - PUNK.

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:47 (nineteen years ago)

I've explained myself already.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:47 (nineteen years ago)

Said "Aeolian cadences" actually being trademark Smokey Robinson key changes.

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:47 (nineteen years ago)

(x-post)

Nick, I think those are good points (and maybe reason why you don't see this kind of analysis in pop music crit). I don't personally believe one has to like a piece of music to write about it in depth. One can "admire" a painting and not like it, right? One can admire a person, and not particularly feel like hanging out with him. At a point, what's relevant is a judgment call (just like art) - in the process of writing about this stuff, yes, I think that there are going to be a lot of judgment calls made about what is and isn't important, but I thought that's what writing about music in detail was about anyway.

Dominique (dleone), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:48 (nineteen years ago)

Making links between Bach and XTC highlights the similarities between them to their respective fan bases and increases the likelyhood of fan crossover, generating more well-rounded music appreciators and taking another step down the road to the abolition of genre ghettofication.

(xpost: There are a lot of chord progressions in homespun beats that are essentially first-year music theory problem sets; also, seeing as gear plays such an important part in beat construction, I don't think that analyzing the sequencing patterns of loops and the variations introduced over the duration of the track is any different to analyzing the way someone plays a guitar and which strings they choose to solo on etc etc etc. The fact that it isn't a "traditional" musical instrument doesn't mean that there can't be any type of basic theory behind its use.)

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:49 (nineteen years ago)

Also, picking "Since U Been Gone" as an example of a song that would be ludicrous to analyze marks you out as a chump from the get-go IMO, seeing as that song is possibly one of the best-constructed pieces of music to hit the radio in the past 18 months.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:51 (nineteen years ago)

Tom OTM re: film criticism. The amount of technical knowledge required to review movies today is equitable to knowing what guitars and "hooks" are. Magazine film reviews are equitable to throwing around words like auto-tune and melisma.

miccio (miccio), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:52 (nineteen years ago)

What most musics writers lack is an inadequate sense of the most important compounds of the musics recipe, namely, is that, melody. If both the musicians and the writer took time to study the intrinsics of develop melodic construct instead of hyping up bang-bang-bang like drug dealers split the skull with spike baseball cap - because that is what hip op musics profits subidise, no? - then musics would be more studiable and there would be learneds dictates on how to appreciate musics properly.

XTC and Bach are greater than Wutang Clans and Grandmother Flash. Fact.

Comstock Carabineri (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:53 (nineteen years ago)

Making links between Bach and XTC highlights the similarities between them to their respective fan bases and increases the likelyhood of fan crossover, generating more well-rounded music appreciators and taking another step down the road to the abolition of genre ghettofication.

I understand, and that's good, but there's something implicitly patronizing about the approach. It reminds me of those high school English teachers who still bore their children to tears praising Dylan and Tupac as "poets" and then comparing their lyrics to T.S. Eliot and Ginsberg.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:53 (nineteen years ago)

Also, picking "Since U Been Gone" as an example of a song that would be ludicrous to analyze marks you out as a chump from the get-go IMO, seeing as that song is possibly one of the best-constructed pieces of music to hit the radio in the past 18 months.

I love "Since U Been Gone" to death!

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:53 (nineteen years ago)

A critic should always bear in mind the form-vs-content dialectic. To apply so much structuralist erudition to, say, "Since U Been Gone" or a Michael Curtiz film makes you look real silly.

i'm baffled because
i) structuralist theory (which i hate) is usually very ignorant of how music/films are made
ii) but it has been used on popular culture as much as 'high art'
iii) what is the form-content dialectic?

Tom OTM re: film criticism. The amount of technical knowledge required to review movies today is equitable to knowing what guitars and "hooks" are. Magazine film reviews are equitable to throwing around words like auto-tune and melisma.
-- miccio (anthonyisrigh...)

maybe this is true -- haha i tend tonly to read very old magazines about film, and things were better 'back then'.

N_RQ, Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:54 (nineteen years ago)

iii) what is the form-content dialectic?

The interplay and tension between form and content.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:56 (nineteen years ago)

I'm wondering how much technical knowledge the artists themselves have, and whether that plays into this. If you're talking hip-hop or electronic music, intimate knowledge of gear and a good ear seems more valued than anything to do with music theory.

actually Mark, I think one of the good things about theory is that one doesn't have to be aware of doing something to do it. it's an objective thing - just like in sociology, one doesn't have to be aware of being a racist in order to act like one (as defined by the discipline).

as for hip-hop, I agree - but then gear and having a good ear (which btw is half of what they teach you in music theory classes - they call it "ear training") are both technical aspects of music, and not so unrelated to "theory"

Dominique (dleone), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:56 (nineteen years ago)

yeah cuz dylan was only pals with ginsberg how the fuck he had the nerve to call himself a poet eh?

patronising cunt

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:57 (nineteen years ago)

I understand, and that's good, but there's something implicitly patronizing about the approach.

I guess if you equate having more than a surface knowledge about how something works with being patronizing about it, that makes sense.

(xpost: again Dom OTM)

The Ghost of Three Cheers For Anti-Intellectualism For Its Own Sake (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:57 (nineteen years ago)

It reminds me of those high school English teachers who still bore their children to tears praising Dylan and Tupac as "poets" and then comparing their lyrics to T.S. Eliot and Ginsberg.

i think TS would see yer man allen as FIRMLY in the tupac/dylan camp. and so in fact would ginsberg.

iii) what is the form-content dialectic?
The interplay and tension between form and content.

-- Alfred Soto (sotoal...)

and what is this 'content'? how do you get to the content?

N_RQ, Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:57 (nineteen years ago)

eliot invented sampling get over it

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:58 (nineteen years ago)

There seems to be a gigantic schism in these conversations between people who like defining things and people who actively shun defining things.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 12:59 (nineteen years ago)

Meat.

white dolemite (White Dolemite), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 21:04 (nineteen years ago)

Yes Tim I think so, there's a subtext that the natural spontaneous force of criticism is emasculated by too much book-learnin'.

Tom (Groke), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 21:07 (nineteen years ago)

Fuck THAT shit.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 21:11 (nineteen years ago)

When I first started writing about more technical stuff, I was accused of "taking things too seriously." A funny criticism - I really wasn't taking the music any more seriously; it was just that I wanted to talk about song structures and harmony and things.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 22:11 (nineteen years ago)

Tim's a great example of a good critic who takes his beloved subject (Paul McCartney) more seriously than anyone has a right to expect.

Alfred Soto (Alfred Soto), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 22:21 (nineteen years ago)

I can't see any reason why theory and history fall outside the "rock criticism" job description. And I dislike the notion of a rock critic job description very much. Why should rock criticism be only one thing? Phil Dellio is great at letting you know what it's like for him to listen to Bonnie Raitt while driving home in the rain; Robert Palmer wrote great descriptions of how James Brown, Howlin' Wolf, et al. constructed their music; I like to write about why kids in high school got ridiculed for being Nazareth fans. There's no reason in the world why the three of us should be forced to write like one another.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 22:22 (nineteen years ago)

No good reason, that is.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 22:25 (nineteen years ago)

Frank, actually, when you said "old radio" and "dreary country Western song," I heard this very specific melody on a lap steel - a sort of typical Hank Williams-style song intro (rising 6ths, if anyone cares).

But I still get your point.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 22:54 (nineteen years ago)

suddenly i'm wondering how much musicality matters if we consider music as being consumed emotionally rather than considered as a work of art/craft.

If you're not going to consider music as art/craft, why bother writing about it at all? I mean how much can you say about the pure experience of being consumed emotionally, and how much of it will translate to your audience?

This thread made me start thinking about film criticism. Film is something I like and appreciate but don't know a great deal about - never took a class, never read any major books on it or anything. But I've picked up a few terms here and there and I find them not only useful but illuminating. I'm actually kind of excited by formal discussions of film, because when I find a moment in a film exciting, knowing more about what that moment is only makes it more exciting. I mean there's this double consciousness thing going on where on one hand you're just overwhelmed by a certain shot and on the other hand you're aware that there was a man who decided exactly how to set up and frame that shot, that you're looking at something manipulated, not just an exciting slice of reality, which is, like, really cool.

I think the same thing can happen in music too - knowing John Coltrane is taking a popular standard and reharmonizing it, and that it's in 6/8, and that it uses an ostinato bass figure or whatever, and also just finding it really mezmerizing and overwhelming.

Hurting (Hurting), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 23:00 (nineteen years ago)

Hurting OTM. x2.

k/l (Ken L), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 23:17 (nineteen years ago)

music writing, and indeed all criticism, should be geared towards the audience who will be reading it

OTM, especially if you're planning on getting paid for it. Beyond that, criticism is whatever you want it to be. Make an argument, fortify/elaborate with evidence, and offer conclusions.

don weiner (don weiner), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 23:39 (nineteen years ago)

Then, knife a hobo.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Wednesday, 19 October 2005 23:40 (nineteen years ago)

Congratulations, Edward! You are the 1,000,000th person to trot out that cliche!
-- The Ghost of Black Elegance (djperr...), October 19th, 2005.

Have you ever considered that cliches are something people repeat over and over again because they're true? Well, if you want something more challenging to mull over, how about this; a film director (can't remember who - Tarkovsky? Godard?) was once asked about the relation of literature to cinema, about how one adapts a book for the screen, and he responded "Literature is smelted in the forge of cinema." Which is a poetic way of saying that a book gets destroyed when it's brought to the screen, and there's nothing wrong with that; it's part of the process of creating something new. So maybe dancing about architecture isn't such an ignoble goal for music criticism after all - it's just that music critics are often bad dancers...

The best music criticism can't / shouldn't be boiled down to two parts music theory, one part sociology, three parts aesthetics. You can either write about music well, or you can't. You can be a great music critic with a bare grasp of the fundamentals, or a bad one with an extensive knowledge of the nuts and bolts. Or vice versa.

In general, music reviews suck because so few critics challenge themselves. Most of what passes for "music criticism" is garden variety journalism. I can't imagine that a general knowledge of music theory would improve the situation - it might make it even more boring than it already is. Few people can consistently explain why a piece of music is good, explain why we should care, or successfully ground a review in the context of the readers/writer's lives and experiences. The writing is rarely as sensuous as the subject - so why bother?

Why is it like this? A bunch of reasons, some of which have been cited above; 1) most writing about music is driven by the soulless vacuum cycle of the newspaper / magazine / recording industry, 2) there is no formal academic study of music criticism, 3) lack of serious journals, 4) lack of mentoring among critics, 5) music fans are lazy bastards, 6) I'll throw in another cliche for good measure, "Rock journalism is mainly people who can't write, interviewing people who can't speak, for people who can't read." But I'd mostly blame the musicians who can't speak. It seems that in music, more so than in literature, art, or cinema, the artists are largely inarticulate about their own work. I'm assuming a lot of people here have interviewed a musician - it's illuminating, innit?

And the "demise" of music theory in music journalism doesn't have anything to do with punk - I'm sure the classic rock fans who sneer at the punk rockers that don't care about formalism sound an awful lot like the jazz journalists who sneered at the idiots who took pop music like Led Zep or The Beatles seriously (just like the jazz journalists had been sneered at by the classical music journalists).

Personally, the reason I read music reviews is the same reason I read the morning paper; to find out what's going on. I don't expect to learn anything. I wish to hell somebody would go about changing that.

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 02:26 (nineteen years ago)

Writing about writing about music is like stabbing yourself with architecture.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Thursday, 20 October 2005 02:31 (nineteen years ago)

So true.

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 03:12 (nineteen years ago)

"An old radio in the corner was turned low; a dreary country and western song competed with static, but no one bothered to reset the dial, or hit the off switch." Now notice something: When I wrote the simple words "card table," you pictured a table. But when I wrote "country and western song," you didn't hear a hear a melody.

well, i head 'visions of johanna'.

N_RQ, Thursday, 20 October 2005 07:53 (nineteen years ago)

I heard the fuckin' MC5.

Sick Mouthy (Nick Southall), Thursday, 20 October 2005 07:54 (nineteen years ago)

can't be bothered to wade through all of this. have i missed anything of import?

Marcello Carlin (nostudium), Thursday, 20 October 2005 08:56 (nineteen years ago)

nothing esp. new here to my jaded eyes, mc. but the opposing schools of thought and most of the major thinkers are well represented.

shockingly I found myself OTM-ing Dan Perry's every post!!!

m coleman (lovebug starski), Thursday, 20 October 2005 09:17 (nineteen years ago)

"Few people can consistently explain why a piece of music is good, explain why we should care, or successfully ground a review in the context of the readers/writer's lives and experiences."

Yeah, but Christ, some of the writing that bores me the most is when Pitchfork writers try to do this with every goddamned release. And, frankly, it's very, very, very rare that I give a shit about the writer's life in the review/writing. Maybe it's because I come from a straight journalism background, but when reviews start with the word "I" it tends to mean a shitty self-indulgent review is on its way.

js (honestengine), Thursday, 20 October 2005 13:21 (nineteen years ago)

Yeah, but Christ, some of the writing that bores me the most is when Pitchfork writers try to do this with every goddamned release. And, frankly, it's very, very, very rare that I give a shit about the writer's life in the review/writing. Maybe it's because I come from a straight journalism background, but when reviews start with the word "I" it tends to mean a shitty self-indulgent review is on its way.

Seconded, but it's not just Pitchfork. personal-anecdote-as-way-in sort of rules the roost right now, and it's not a terrible approach, just really tired & overdone; not every review need begin with some comp-class conceit. One might, shock horror, even start addressing the musical content of the item in question in the first line of the review. The first line of the first paragraph, not the second.

I view this whole problem as 1) rather more spiritual than technical in nature and 2) probably a function of youth vs age, which is the elephant in this thread's living room I think

Banana Nutrament (ghostface), Thursday, 20 October 2005 13:34 (nineteen years ago)

Bling, bling, bling. I wouldn't want to hear about this guy's life in the review/writing.

http://content.ytmnd.com//60000/60849/image.gif

In fact, maybe reviewers should always put a little picture of themselves in the corner, as is sometimes the case, so you can see who's giving you their opinion and better judge if you should waste your time reading it.

Ghos'face, Thursday, 20 October 2005 13:47 (nineteen years ago)

that is, like, totally the opposite of what I was saying, congratulations

Banana Nutrament (ghostface), Thursday, 20 October 2005 13:53 (nineteen years ago)

My comments were not directed to you. Congratulations.

Ghos'face, Thursday, 20 October 2005 13:55 (nineteen years ago)

evidently when Rolling Stone Started Jann had a ban on the use of I in a review...He felt that was for the almost-snobby Crawdaddy crowd. I support such a policy, but for the reasons stated above. In some Tom Waits article my girlfriend read a bit ago, he talks about how he wont write songs about himself because its boring.

bb (bbrz), Thursday, 20 October 2005 13:56 (nineteen years ago)

"I think the same thing can happen in music too - knowing John Coltrane is taking a popular standard and reharmonizing it, and that it's in 6/8, and that it uses an ostinato bass figure or whatever, and also just finding it really mezmerizing and overwhelming."

You're right hurting. My questioning in regard to emotional consumption was wondering whether or not I should care how a record has that emotional effect. And when/how rigorously considering how that might happen should be woven into review copy.

bb (bbrz), Thursday, 20 October 2005 14:01 (nineteen years ago)

My comments were not directed to you. Congratulations.

it was the "in fact" that had me reading it that way I think, my bad

Banana Nutrament (ghostface), Thursday, 20 October 2005 14:02 (nineteen years ago)

"If you're not going to consider music as art/craft, why bother writing about it at all? I mean how much can you say about the pure experience of being consumed emotionally, and how much of it will translate to your audience?"

that, btw, is the truth of it. So then, the crux of the writer is to explain to the reader why the craft is interesting (esp if that reader is the sort that goes the emotional consumption route). Having the ability to consider the musicality of the piece, then seems almost necessary. It might be the difference between the critic and the consumer that allows the critic to effectively explain.

bb (bbrz), Thursday, 20 October 2005 14:05 (nineteen years ago)

Banana, maybe I can relate it to what you've said though...

1.) Spiritual vs. technical 2.) Youth vs. age

Good points, which is why we have all different sorts of reviewers, obviously. It is somewhat frustrating to me that a lot of reviews are geared toward a mindset I frequently find myself identifying as "for kids," but I suppose that only stands to reason since pop music is a youth-targeted product for the most part and the readership of those magazines and columns is largely under the age of 40, I would imagine. To tie this in with my comment about the bling bling guy in that gif image, the "spirit" and [mental?] age of the dude in that image is exactly why I wouldn't want to waste my time on one of his reviews (although if a review was stuck right there in the middle of the paper, I probably would read it out of curiosity). But, someone else would, no doubt, immediately be interested in what this person has to say based on the very things that turn me off about the gif image. Of course, you don't need to include a picture of the reviewer; spirit and age is conveyed in reviews by the language used. It might take more time to get a bead on it, it might not. It is represented in the very qualities you single out and I'm going to go with a more technical, mature viewpoint every time over a spirited youthful one.

Ghos'face, Thursday, 20 October 2005 14:18 (nineteen years ago)

What's your mag, Ghos'face?

Mark (MarkR), Thursday, 20 October 2005 15:25 (nineteen years ago)

That's pretty much the reason I stopped buying mags. Now I just use Google. When I find something intriguing, I search "x sucks" vs. "i love x," "x rules," etc. Amazon recommends has helped me track down some stuff, too, surprisingly. Audio clip > review.

Ghos'face, Thursday, 20 October 2005 15:37 (nineteen years ago)

OK, when you said "we" I thought you edited something.

Mark (MarkR), Thursday, 20 October 2005 16:05 (nineteen years ago)

"Few people can consistently explain why a piece of music is good, explain why we should care, or successfully ground a review in the context of the readers/writer's lives and experiences."

Yeah, but Christ, some of the writing that bores me the most is when Pitchfork writers try to do this with every goddamned release. And, frankly, it's very, very, very rare that I give a shit about the writer's life in the review/writing. Maybe it's because I come from a straight journalism background, but when reviews start with the word "I" it tends to mean a shitty self-indulgent review is on its way.

-- js (roc...), October 20th, 2005.

I agree with you. But I'm not saying that there's no one trying - it's that so few music writers consistently pull it off successfully. Perhaps they would be greater in number if some of the factors I mentioned above were in place. If music journalists had their asses kicked by teachers and editors the way real journalists (*ducks*) and creative writers do, maybe the quality level would inch a little higher.

The goal is not to turn every record review into a confession booth - the goal is to write well. Be engaging. I don't care if you want to write about 7/8 time signatures and the pentatonic scale - if you're writing well, it will be engaging. Maybe I'm an old idealogue, but my question is, if the record review were a book, would you sit down and read it? Will this review make any sense 10 years from now?

Having a review be relevant to someone's life and experiences doesn't mean the new Sufjan Stevens album reminds me of the time grandma backed her Lincoln-Continental over my cat, and boy did that make me sad. What makes his music meaningful? What is it about longing that feels right? Why do we crave sad songs?

If you want to talk about how his time signatures and chord progressions do or don't support his aesthetics, great. But if I read a review that says "Tattooed Love Boys" has a 7/8 signature, I'd hear some warning bells. Why not say it has an irregular time signature? A jagged rhythm? A disorienting rhythm? If the writer isn't adding some value during the transmission of his technical understanding to the reader, it's going to be a slow read. Of course, if your writing is compelling enough, maybe you'll make me look up what a 7/8 time signature is. But it's not going to be compelling if there isn't some substance besides a technical analysis. People react emotionally to music. End of story.

I'll throw in here that unlike poetry, prose, painting, sculpture, film, etc., music is not a representational art form. Most other art forms simulate real objects, making writing about them a bit more grounded in an everday world of nouns and verbs - music is just music. It doesn't represent anything but itself. This alone makes it challenging to come up with the proper language to analyze it.

Is there anyone in academia doing systematic study of human's perception of music? Of understanding how people are affected by music, and what terms the lay person uses / understands when describing music? Would a rock journalist study such things, even if they existed, in order to better his/her writing? Is anybody reflecting on the nature of music? Is there a philosophy of music?

Ah, fuck it. I'm gonna go put on some Sabbath.

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 16:59 (nineteen years ago)

Have you ever considered that cliches are something people repeat over and over again because they're true?

You are also the 1,000,000th person to use this cliche.

Much like warning bells go off in your head when you see explicit mentions to specific time signatures, warning bells go off in my head when I see people actively championing ignorance. Your entire argument boils down to an anti-intellectual stance that disparages learning or writing about music from a technical or theoretical standpoint; your "it needs to be written well" point is completely immaterial because if a review IS written-well, it doesn't matter what tools were used to get the point across and there's no particular point in talking about how talking technical ruins music writing.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Thursday, 20 October 2005 17:43 (nineteen years ago)

well, i head 'visions of johanna'.

Ack! I've been busted.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Thursday, 20 October 2005 17:58 (nineteen years ago)

"I don't want to read about..." = "I don't want to learn about..."

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Thursday, 20 October 2005 18:07 (nineteen years ago)

Much like warning bells go off in your head when you see explicit mentions to specific time signatures, warning bells go off in my head when I see people actively championing ignorance.

Wow, I've never been charged with that! I'm starting to like this place.

Your entire argument boils down to an anti-intellectual stance that disparages learning or writing about music from a technical or theoretical standpoint;

Glad to hear you've boiled down my argument; maybe if you read it a few more times you'll start to understand it.

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 18:43 (nineteen years ago)

So how would you boil down your own argument?

Ned Raggett (Ned), Thursday, 20 October 2005 18:44 (nineteen years ago)

With a saucepan, of course.

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:00 (nineteen years ago)

HUR HUR HUR.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:02 (nineteen years ago)

You are the 1,000,000th person to use that fake laugh.

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:12 (nineteen years ago)

Yay wonderful me!

Ned Raggett (Ned), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:15 (nineteen years ago)

I'd love to read a technical analysis of what makes a good melody, why some people have a talent for them, and why most songwriters lose the ability to write interesting melodies as they age.

Mark (MarkR), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:22 (nineteen years ago)

there's already a thread about that, started (of course) by Geir I think...

Shakey Mo Collier (Shakey Mo Collier), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:33 (nineteen years ago)

As has been asked before on this thread, I think, at least in what I've read of it, who is the audience for this technical analysis? If the non-instrument playing, non-singing laypeople, are they really going get much out of it, despite a professed "desire to learn"? If musicians, don't they get more out just trying to play the song themselves, either by learning it by ear, or looking it up somewhere, than if they were to, say, read some classical music guy's explanation of why some Beatles chord changes are "surprising"? I'm not knocking this guy, just saying. No doubt a careful reading of the thread up until now holds the key.

k/l (Ken L), Thursday, 20 October 2005 19:46 (nineteen years ago)

As has been asked before on this thread, I think, at least in what I've read of it, who is the audience for this technical analysis?

Me.

The Ghost of Black Elegance (Dan Perry), Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:03 (nineteen years ago)

What about Ned? You can't have one Imaginary Boy without the other.

k/l (Ken L), Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:06 (nineteen years ago)

So how would you boil down your own argument?
-- Ned Raggett (ne...), October 20th, 2005.

In case you were being serious (Ned, sometimes I have a hard time telling with you)...

1) Music criticism is a multi-faceted thing. A music critic should have some understanding of theory, history, aesthetics, sociology, but most of all a good understanding of how people process and experience music.

2) First and foremost, music critics are writers. Working on improving writing/reasoning skills will make you a better music critic than studying music theory, even if you are taking a purely technical approach in your writing.

3) A more formalized avenue of study than interning at Spin and hanging out at the Knitting Factory is required to realize points #1 and #2.

4) While there are methods to pursue a formal study of music theory, there are far fewer to pursue a formal study of music criticism. A higher priority, then, would be to create this formal study.

Ergo create the environment to realize points #1 and #2. If necessary, the technical will follow.

Caveat: Great writers break all the rules.

All my love,
The anti-intellectual

Edward III (edward iii), Thursday, 20 October 2005 20:13 (nineteen years ago)

that dude is way cooler than 90% of ilx!

anyway the problem is that a vocabulary for pop CAN exist, but terms developed in the production of classic music are only partially successful. the modern avant-garde in its own way ran into this issue -- that music theory 101 or even 4000 only describes a limited subset of the vast sonic possibilities of people making noise. you need ot be able to count, sure, but when timbaland calls certain drums "dirty" that's also a technical term, but one that only means the same thing to a limited subset of ppl. timbo's dirty drums and dj paul's dirty drums are probably a very different thing. so if you asked either to make the drums dirtier they'd do something different and if you asked either what the other did they'd describe it differently. music's unvoicability is a block language where everyone is shouting orders and making up new rules as they go, based on seeing one man shout orders and another, unrelatedly (maybe) tossing a block halfway across the room.

the technical vocabulary of today's music is protools and synth presets and breaks. know a boom-bap from a poum poum. know how baltimore cuts the other half of the breakbeats to draw the sound out. that's technical, and you don't need to speak a lick of cod italian.

Sterling Clover (s_clover), Sunday, 23 October 2005 06:16 (nineteen years ago)

franz ferdinand are a worthless pile of offal and it is convenient in several corners of the industry for them to be commercially successful, although given that their new album has already fallen to number five in its second week of release, we will hopefully be seeing the back of those chancers soon.

I hope not. So is it a random/google thing to like Franz here?

zeus (zeus), Sunday, 23 October 2005 10:25 (nineteen years ago)


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